Mom inevitably becomes a quality test subject at her own factory.

[chanks420]

I searched but couldn't find a similar theme to this one, so I am posting this suggestion. There are enough perverted minds here, including my self who could make this a pretty hot one.

So here goes the synopsis.

Julian is a PhD in human biology and neural sciences. Through years of hard work she has developed a patented design for the the most ideal fleshlight which stimulates the real feel for various parts of a female anatomy. Her factory produces the product in various assortments and types, which are sold like hot cakes Nation wide.

Her son joins her company after his MBA and takes up the portfolio of marketing and quality manager. All goes well until she decides to adopt a new motto for her product business that says, " We make and sell the real thing".

Her product gets international acclaim but when she starts to export to Europe, trade regulations come into force which dictate that industry standards of a stricter type be applied.

Additionally some customers take her to court challenging the company slogan, " We make and sell the real thing" . The court demands that the slogan be substantiated by physical tests.

European trade regulations coupled with the court order put Julian in an awkward position where she, being the patent designer has to ensure her self that the product is as good as the real thing.

She sets up a test procedure discretely where male subjects while blind folded have to perform sexual acts on her in a clinical setup and then replicate the same act with the flesh light, all while the court appointed industry regulator keeps a watch on her. At the end of the test the subjects have to decide which was the real and better experience.

Since her fleshlights emulate all orifices of the female body, for vaginal , anal and oral sex, therefore Julian has to undergo the tests for all of them. Due to time shortage the tests have to be done at a fast pace, prompting her to have anal, vaginal and oral sex simultaneously.

During all this commotion her son also gets involved, (the perverted industry regulator manipulates events to make it happen). Julian knows that she is doing a clinical test with her son, but doesn't know that her son also knows that he is doing it with her (blind folded).

I still have to figure out the climax and then the drop scene for this story.

Any ideas, any suggestions????

 

[rockjently]

Interesting...

That's pretty interesting stuff. I would read that story.

If the plot setup is very extensive, then you could consider inserting some hot sexy parts early in the story or starting with Julian during the testing, and doing the setup in flashback or something.

Maybe it's just me - I have a short attention span if I read too many pages and no one is getting pleasured . . .

 

[sirhugs]

and here from just the title I thought it would be a mattress factory...

 

[chanks420]

That's pretty interesting stuff. I would read that story.

If the plot setup is very extensive, then you could consider inserting some hot sexy parts early in the story or starting with Julian during the testing, and doing the setup in flashback or something.

Maybe it's just me - I have a short attention span if I read too many pages and no one is getting pleasured . . .

Thanks that's a good idea, kinky flash backs always keep up the momentum, whether in prose or film.

 

[bernett69]

seems like an incredible idea. very interesting unplanned mother and son fun.

 

[HeyAll]

I love it. The only thing I would change is the court stuff, because there's no way a court would ever do that and it would take away the believability.

Perhaps, their funding is cut, or perhaps the product is being rush released and mom needs to test it asap.

 

[bernett69]

maybe better with just the threat of the court action challenging the company slogan. out of fear of the legal struggle she just agrees to the testing

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... The court demands that the slogan be substantiated by physical tests. ...

I love it. The only thing I would change is the court stuff, because there's no way a court would ever do that ...

The court might not but the Advertising Standards Authority in the UK would, and can prosecute if you don't either obey or withdraw the advert.

The tests have to be "double blind" so that neither the tester nor the subject know whether it's a real product or a fake one.

That could lead to some interesting side scenes in the labs building the fake ones.

 

[rockjently]

The idea that you have to subject the product to tests that prove it's just as good as the real thing is too questionable to come from a court or government standards body. Personally I would have the protagonist (Julian) brought before a corporate board meeting where the lawyers point out that they are going to have to pull the product because they are getting sued for false advertising by a so-called consumer (who in reality is a distruntled competitor) and the board orders her to do the tests so they can use them as evidence.

Even though it's still a dubious course of action, I think most people including your readers will believe just about anything when it comes to lawyers or corporations. And perhaps with good reason if you follow the news...

There is a comedic element to this story idea that makes it fun to read, in addition to being hot and sexy. I would suggest to embrace this element rather than shy away from it.

 

[bernett69]

The idea that you have to subject the product to tests that prove it's just as good as the real thing is too questionable to come from a court or government standards body. Personally I would have the protagonist (Julian) brought before a corporate board meeting where the lawyers point out that they are going to have to pull the product because they are getting sued for false advertising by a so-called consumer (who in reality is a distruntled competitor) and the board orders her to do the tests so they can use them as evidence.

Even though it's still a dubious course of action, I think most people including your readers will believe just about anything when it comes to lawyers or corporations. And perhaps with good reason if you follow the news...

There is a comedic element to this story idea that makes it fun to read, in addition to being hot and sexy. I would suggest to embrace this element rather than shy away from it.

don't forget rock that this is originally over in Europe some where. I can't say I under stand US laws none the less laws and standards over there. I mean we come from a country which allows someone to sue McDonald's because their "hot" coffee was actually hot. now you know if these people got a cold cup of coffee they would be the first people to sue for lack of service....

I think there is great leeway in use of law in stories, to most a vague representation would go just fine to move the story forward, this is fantasy after all, we can play it out somewhat and keep it believable too.

 

[shesnotcheating]

Re: Reality

Who gives a shit if it's realistic or not.

I'd make the woman a naive wife who is a materials engineer. She's been given descriptions on what the material should feel like, in terms of softness, slipperiness, stretchability(is that a word?), etc. - but has no idea what she's making. That is, until she's hauled into court. There, the evil, warped judge gets one look at the voluptuous but naive young wife, and has to see her defiled.

He calls the equally deranged attorneys into his chambers, after which, our naive young wife has the details of the case explained to her. The end result is she winds up being the object of comparison, made airtight repeatedly by the all male jury.

 

[bernett69]

Who gives a shit if it's realistic or not.

well said,LOL

 

[JRaven]

As I read the original post when it came to legal issues, I was thinking that Julian would have to strip nude and stand next to one of her flesh lights. This would show that since she was the model for the flesh light, it would be just like fucking her.

Then her lawyer, thinking a piece of ass might sway the all male jury, offers them the chance to fuck both the flesh light and the real Julian. They can then decide for themselves if it's "the real thing".

After winning the case (of course), son questions the jury's findings. Not officially, but to his mother. After admitting trying the flesh light a few times and even more often after he finds out it was modeled after his mother, he wants to test his mother.

As for some early sex, how does she manage to make the flesh light just like herself? She has to have some one make the mold. "Since I'll be nude while you work on my body, why don't you two get naked as well?"

"Sure thing. Do you want the mold done pre-fuck or just fucked?"

"How about both? We can then check and see which is better."


Jenny

 

[chanks420]

Thanks every one for the brilliant and kinky ideas. If someone doesn't write this one, I would have to develop it myself.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

and here from just the title I thought it would be a mattress factory...

I thought about a vibrator factory.

Maybe this could become a new branch. At first they sell fleshlight, then they expand to vibrators. And to make sure that the vibrators are good, they are tested by several women.

And since the son was mentioned: he could be included, too. Maybe they have this new product: a vibrator with a remote control. The woman has to insert it and then, either she, or someone else controls the vibrator with the remote. Maybe there is this special harness, so that the vibrator can't slip out

Mom wants to test it, but she needs someone who uses the remote control. The only person in the factory who she really trusts is her son. So she tells him to use the remote control, while she has the vibrator inserted. Of course, she covers her lap with a towel, while her son is near, but when the vibrator is turned on, she becomes totally horny and moves around, and finally, the towel falls down. And there she sits on this seat, her legs wide apart, with a vibrator up her pussy and her son looking right at her vagina ...

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Thanks every one for the brilliant and kinky ideas. If someone doesn't write this one, I would have to develop it myself.

Write it anyway. If you have looked at some of the short story competition entries you will have realised that two authors with a very tight remit can write very different stories.

 

[chanks420]

I thought about a vibrator factory.

Maybe this could become a new branch. At first they sell fleshlight, then they expand to vibrators. And to make sure that the vibrators are good, they are tested by several women.

And since the son was mentioned: he could be included, too. Maybe they have this new product: a vibrator with a remote control. The woman has to insert it and then, either she, or someone else controls the vibrator with the remote. Maybe there is this special harness, so that the vibrator can't slip out

Mom wants to test it, but she needs someone who uses the remote control. The only person in the factory who she really trusts is her son. So she tells him to use the remote control, while she has the vibrator inserted. Of course, she covers her lap with a towel, while her son is near, but when the vibrator is turned on, she becomes totally horny and moves around, and finally, the towel falls down. And there she sits on this seat, her legs wide apart, with a vibrator up her pussy and her son looking right at her vagina ...

I like your idea of including vibrators to the mix. Perhaps a reverse testing could follow the ordeal. Hmmm let me think how to seamlessly join both.