Older vs. younger lesbians

[Olds84]

I've been into the whole older and younger lesbian theme for a bit now, but I've yet to really find a story that really does it for me. I would say the domination of the younger lesbian by the older one is something of particular interest. Does anyone have any story suggestions, websites, or thoughts on this? I'm writing my own story about a teacher blackmailing a student with a cop, so any feedback would be appreciated.

 

[estragon]

Olds, the Bedding the Babysitter series by SilkStockingsLover should do it. Declaring an interest, I copy edit for SilkStockingsLover.

 

[Olds84]

I've read her stuff. She's really good at what she does. It seems that what she writes is always multi layered and intriguing beyond the lesbian theme.

 

[hamilcar]

Old vs Young

The seduction and dominance of a young female officer (Army would be most likely) by an older female NCO set against the campaign in Afghanistan or Iraq would be an interesting approach. I spent years in the military and working for the Army . This is a scenario that could easily be true. I can't write more now but if you are interested respond.

 

[estragon]

I've read her stuff. She's really good at what she does. It seems that what she writes is always multi layered and intriguing beyond the lesbian theme.

A lot of mind control as well. Silk's latest Soccer Mom story is indeed multilayered. And the novel she's currently writing will get a lot of people hot and bothered.

As for the Army seduction story, I think the key will be the jargon and the setting. Readers who were there will spot any error or inaccuracy and lay a deserved blast on the story.

 

[Olds84]

I agree. This story would have to be co wrote with someone who was in the Army. I'm an Air Force veteran who works with the Army now, but the lingo between the green suitors is something I don't entirely know. It looks like a promising story, but to do it justice you would need a few people helping.

 

[estragon]

I don't want this to seem like I'm piling on after the whistle, but I have a phobia about posting a story which depends upon specialized knowledge that I don't have, and having someone who has that knowledge laying a major league blast on me. So I suggest as a co-author or technical adviser not only an Army veteran (I'm one, however my war was three wars and more than forty years ago), but one who served recently in the places you're going to be writing about. The lingo changes, the Service changes, and the climate and geography matter...and there are plenty of people who will spot any mistake.

 

[Olds84]

Not piling on at all Estragon. I agree with your assessment.