needing an editor soon

[mikey2much]

I have a two part series posted now, and I have a third installment almost ready to go.
The first part posted in 'First time" The second part posted in 'gay male',
I think the third part will be in bdsm or gay male, I am not sure yet.

Anyway the reason I am writing this post before I am ready for the editor is this. Since this story is a continiuation of the first two parts, I would like for the person that edits it to read the first two installments.
Does that seem to be asking too much?

Have any of you reading this post read my Panama stories?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Anyway the reason I am writing this post before I am ready for the editor is this. Since this story is a continiuation of the first two parts, I would like for the person that edits it to read the first two installments

Probably a good idea that the editor be the same.

 

[mikey2much]

I agree

The guy who helped me with part one was snooper, but I think he told me that he didn't like to do gay male, which is what this one is. like part two was.

Did you help me with Panama the Canal zone?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

The guy who helped me with part one was snooper, but I think he told me that he didn't like to do gay male, which is what this one is. like part two was.

Did you help me with Panama the Canal zone?

Yeah, gay male is, pardon the expression, hard to find an editor for. Best of luck.

 

[mikey2much]

Trolling for an editor

As I stated in the OP, I am looking for an editor. I have two chapters in the series already posted. The tale I am wanting to tell is about a young man who takes a job working in the kitchen on a merchant ship. In the first chapter he has his first sexual encounter in a whorehouse in Panama. It posted in First Time. It wore a little red 'H' for quite a while but somehow it has lost ground in it's scores and lost it.

The second chapter dealt with an encounter between the young dining room orderly and 'the pilot', a man who comes aboard a ship when it enters a port, a man who knows the local waters. They are required to pilot the ships to avoid the local dangers. He is a man the boy will never see again, on the boat and then off the boat completely left behind. When he blackmails the boy, the boy is forced into a situation of comit the act and live without anybody knowing about it or not doing the act and having everybody think he did. It posted in gay male and it still gets to wear it's little red 'H'.

So now for the story that I want an editor for. The young man is going to be forced by both his own awakening sexuality as well as the boatswain and another seaman, to explore who he was, what sort of sexual animal lived in his skin. I know, I know, it sounds like every other stroke story you ever didn't give a shit if your read it or not, kind of tale. But I think I have a foundation built, I think I have populated the story with people that can develop into characters you can relate to.

That is what I am trying to do. I want to tell a story that, while it has a great deal of sex in it, it will be more than a stroke story. I mean it's like 'Jaws' had a lot of shark in it, but you wouldn't call it a fish story would you?

I might have already mentioned this but I sure could use a good editor.
Any takers?

 

[sr71plt]

Do you have Word and can work with its tracking change system? If so, and if you can't find another editor, will take what is probably a one-shot edit, and can wait a week for results, PM me, and I'll give you an e-mail address to send a Word attachment to to be returned to the e-mail address you use.

 

[nakdsub]

Good luck Mikey

I wrote to several editors asking for assistance and never heard back from any of them. I finally gave up. I have to laugh when someone picks out a mistake and says to get an editor. Obviously they've never tried to do it themselves.

 

[mikey2much]

judging from the post before yours

It seems that I have gotten lucky again. I wish you the best of luck with your story.

While I would never call myself an editor, I might be able to help you find a few mistakes. If your desperation ever gets so deep that my offer might be something you would consider, let me know