Daddy's Little Psychopath

[LordOfHell]

I recently uploaded a story I titled "Daddy's Little Psychopath" and I wanted more opinions from the Literotica public.

(Courtesy link: http://www.literotica.com/s/daddys-little-psychopath)

I've gotten a lot of requests for a sequel, and while I've got many good ideas for one, I wanted to know what some of the others here thought about the story and wanted to see in a followup. I'd appreciate all of the suggestions, criticism, and musings that anyone has to offer.

I thank anyone who takes the time to answer in advance.

Thanks

Lord Of Hell

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Aren't you in the wrong part of the messaageboard or are you just touting for custom in all areas?

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Aren't you in the wrong part of the messaageboard or are you just touting for custom in all areas?

The latter methinks - authors are very aggressive - imagine the reception poetry'd get ................

 

[UnderYourSpell]

The latter methinks - authors are very aggressive - imagine the reception poetry'd get ................

I propose you as the first to try

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

I propose you as the first to try

*tippytoes out of the thread*

 

[champagne1982]

I propose you as the first to try

Oh I did. My poem lives on as a story although it's rarely read... LOL but that's like all my stuff.

There was some Kafluffle over posting it in the halloween contest that year, and the delay was long enough to keep me out of the running. My argument was that if the Lit admins were posting very short fiction as poetry then they could damn well post epic and ballad poems in stories, so that they'd qualify for the money.

But, no one else ever went on to actually try to win a special story contest with a poem. So much for testing the waters.

 

[ishtat]

I put a recommendation on the AH for one of Angeline's poems a few months back. I thought it was exceptional writing and deserved a wider audience. Result, not a single response, not one. Plus ca change?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

It's us and them isn't it? I've seen Authors come over here to submit their poems and they always bring their friends to tell them in the comments box how wonderful they are, when to my mind they know very little and aren't going to learn either if they just trundle in with friends and trundle right on out again

 

[twelveoone]

I put a recommendation on the AH for one of Angeline's poems a few months back. I thought it was exceptional writing and deserved a wider audience. Result, not a single response, not one. Plus ca change?

I hope she wasn't trolled.
A comment, she posted one poem, I had no idea what it was, it just made me uneasy. Most people don't like not knowing or feeling uneasy. Most really good poetry you will not know and make you feel uneasy. Frost was a master of that.
Her's was about a cemetery.

 

[butters]

well, i've just been in touch with the OP and have his apologies: he thought he'd already posted it was placed erroneously here and is suitably abashed aw bless 'im.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

How do you post by mistake miles from home? I only ask so I don't make the mistake of making some trivial post that gets me berated in the BDSM Cafe

 

[champagne1982]

How do you post by mistake miles from home? I only ask so I don't make the mistake of making some trivial post that gets me berated in the BDSM Cafe

LOL UYS. That won't get you berated as much as it will spanked. Vive l'erroneous error..

 

[The_Fool]

LOL UYS. That won't get you berated as much as it will spanked. Vive l'erroneous error..

Spanking Carrie... The next best seller.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

LOL UYS. That won't get you berated as much as it will spanked. Vive l'erroneous error..

oohhhhhhh promises promises

Spanking Carrie... The next best seller.

with fool .... ish footnotes

 

[butters]

How do you post by mistake miles from home? I only ask so I don't make the mistake of making some trivial post that gets me berated in the BDSM Cafe

*gaelic shrug*
beats me... (snerk)

LOL UYS. That won't get you berated as much as it will spanked. Vive l'erroneous error..

and that too!

Spanking Carrie... The next best seller.

sounds a great title. who's gonna write it? and hello

oohhhhhhh promises promises



with fool .... ish footnotes

*snickers*

 

[champagne1982]

Spanking Carrie... The next best seller.

I was torn between errogenous and erroneous..

I will tell you though, mr fool... should you ever start up second life and wish a tp to this sim (lol no, not poetry, I'm afraid) send the word and you may hear a particular version of "Spanking Carrie" you didn't bargain on. LOL