My First Story-A Perfect Threesome

dave110256

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My wife and I finally had our perfect threesome so I wrote a short story here about it. I am definately no pro but would like feedback. I know I could have gone into more details and will when or if I write another one. I will only write something that we actually do so we're hoping for more great experiences. Thank you in advance for any and all comments.
 
My wife and I finally had our perfect threesome so I wrote a short story here about it. I am definately no pro but would like feedback. I know I could have gone into more details and will when or if I write another one. I will only write something that we actually do so we're hoping for more great experiences. Thank you in advance for any and all comments.

It would be helpful if you added a link to your story.
 
sorry, here's the link.....I am a virgin to this

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-perfect-threesome


I guess I'm getting my answers by the ratings it's receiving....it's only 3.8 now. I have had some very nice comments and appreciate it. It's especially appreciated as this is my first attempt at this. I will write about our future adventures as I'm sure there will be man. I know a man who would like to bring another friend with him.....I think 3 men with my wife would be hot!!!!!
 
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I just did a revision of my story, I hope it's a little better. will take a few days to show up
 
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