Feedback request

[happenstance]

I have posted a new story, Women and I, and would really appreciate some feedback on that story, or on any of my stories. Thank you. By the way, the story is in the Incest category, so read it only if you are not comfortable with that.

The link is here:

https://server16.kproxy.com/servlet...ftjzd/sqrs/p1/stories/showstory.php?id=491621

 

[happenstance]

Sorry, it should read: read it only if you are comfortable. Sorry.

 

[driphoney]

Sorry, it should read: read it only if you are comfortable. Sorry.

Cute! I do that sort of thing.

And no, I'm not comfortable.

 

[HugeErectson]

I would read it but the link doesn't show any story.

 

[Sanichi]

So am I only supposed to read it unless I'm not uncomfortable, or the other way around?

happenstance, your link didn't work for me either, but I found the story here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=491621

 

[HugeErectson]

By the way, the story is in the Incest category, so read it only if you are not comfortable with that.

The link is here:

https://server16.kproxy.com/servlet...ftjzd/sqrs/p1/stories/showstory.php?id=491621

And what's wrong with that category? I'm right in the middle of reading one of your first stories and I have to say I absolutely love it. I love the imagery of your huge breasts with the blue veins running just underneath. Wow....

 

[happenstance]

@Huge - the link works when I click on it, don't know why it's not working for others.
@Sanichi - Sorry, for the misplaced 'not' word. It's the other way around. Thanks for finding the correct link, much appreciated.

 

[happenstance]

@Huge - many people find these stories highly offensive, so I'm just warning them.

 

[happenstance]

@ Huge - I hope you enjoy it.

 

[HugeErectson]

"@Huge - many people find these stories highly offensive, so I'm just warning them."

@Happenstance. Haha, yes I know. But I've read "Mom's make over" and "Change of perspective" and I find absolutely nothing wrong with them. I'm on the 2nd page of "Mom's Makeover" and I'm loving it. I really can't find anything offensive in it so far. Out of all the stories I've read on Literotica, these stories are at the top of my list. My favorite is one called "Morning Mom". Yours is right up there with it. I'm not so into hardcore stories, but ones that involve teasing, ridiculously small outfits and the such really get my attention. The part in "Change of Perspective" where the mom had her son take photos did catch me a little off guard, but it was nonetheless very welcome. I only wish you had made that part longer. Much longer.

The following is a story of my own. It's only a rough draft so please forgive any grammatical errors and such. But I'm having a really difficult time finishing it. Honestly, I get too worked up to finish it and was actually wondering if maybe you could supply me with some ideas. The spirit of the story I wrote was mostly inspired by another story called "Morning Mom". That and another fetish of mine that is abit odd by some peoples standards.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=725584

I would really love to hear any ideas you have Happenstance. I'm already a Huge fan of yours.

 

[Sanichi]

@HugeErectson,

Your link is to one or other of your own threads where neither link works. I believe you mean this:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=56255

The story is "Morning Mom" by loadedgun. Category Incest/Taboo.

Just curious, I haven't read any of them.