first story

[dreamsreal]

i just wrote my first story its a loving wife story pm me to read it i need feedback

 

[EmilyJackT]

I want to read your story.I am a good reader,so i can give you a good review

 

[Sanichi]

Ouch

I want to read your story.I am a good reader,so i can give you a good review

If your first post is advertising a proofreading service, take care. There should be a space between a period and the following capital; "I" should be capitalized; sentence ends with a period or other punctuation.

This is a duplicated thread, see: "i just wrote my first story its a loving wife story pm me to read it i need feedba" by dreamsreal. As at the time of posting, help is on its way.

 

[geniecrow]

I also want to read your story do mail me. I am very excited about it

 

[Sanichi]

Another form of spam?

Lucky dreamsreal, such heat s/he is attracting.

@geniecrow, if EmilyJackT is a poor grammarian touting a proofreading site, how do you figure on escort services?

 

[driphoney]

Lucky dreamsreal, such heat s/he is attracting.

@geniecrow, if EmilyJackT is a poor grammarian touting a proofreading site, how do you figure on escort services?

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