Flirtatious Notions

[Sicilian24]

Would love some feedback on my poem, let me know your thoughts, thanks

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=485409

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Read and commented. I hope some of what I said was useful (of course it is only one person's opinion so keep that in mind). One way to really improve your poetry is to hang around this forum, take part in the challenges, and read other people's poems. It has really helped me.

 

[Sicilian24]

Read and commented. I hope some of what I said was useful (of course it is only one person's opinion so keep that in mind). One way to really improve your poetry is to hang around this forum, take part in the challenges, and read other people's poems. It has really helped me.

Thanks for the feedback! I've been writing for 5 years now and am a Mod on a poetry site.

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Wonderful to meet you, Sicilian. Welcome to the PF&D.

 

[Sicilian24]

Thank, nice to meet you too