Gym teacher Mrs Hunters HUGE find...

[Kyle_Watson]

See revised...

 

[glynndah]

A daunting, much too daunting for this reader, solid wall of words. Paragraph breaks and a little white space would have been much appreciated.

 

[Handley_Page]

I agree.
Try the story discussion thread.

 

[driphoney]

I agree.
Try the story discussion thread.

He's not interested in you anyway, HP. He's looking for a woman.

 

[The_Fool]

He's not interested in you anyway, HP. He's looking for a woman.

Ya me too.

 

[Guest]

(What I'm actually hoping to do for this story is to get a female perspective from where I left off. So any of you women out there who'd like to put yourself in Mrs Hunters shoes, let me know. I'd also be up for roleplaying the rest out online somewhere. Enjoy..)

I don't need to roleplay.

As for the rest, paragraphs, please. It's too difficult to read.