Sex Kittens (Humorous Story)

[Dominique1]

The first chapter of a story which I have written has just gone online.

My story, called "Sex Kittens", a humorous sci-fi/fantasy story about a drunken woman, Sue who meets someone, Dominique at a bar. Dominique asks Sue what she would want more than anything else in the world. Sue says she wants:

1) No more men.

2) Lots of chocolate - "I want is coming out my arse!"

3) Meet lots of really sexy people.

4) She quite likes cats.

Sue then passes out drunk and Dominique takes her back to her "place". When Sue wakes up she finds herself completely transformed and somewhere totally new. It turns out that Dominique has fulfilled her wishes.

Dominique comes from a a dimension which is "pornocratic". Everything in it is in some way sexual or kinky. So, she will meet lots of sexy people. The people in this world are actually catgirls/neko, and all of them are hermaphrodites, so there are no more men (or women). To fit in, Sue has been turned into a hermaphrodite neko. Also, to fit in with hir (that is the herm pronoun) other wish, Dominique has transformer hir body into chocolate, so it really does come out of hir arse - and hir penis, hir mouth, hir cunt etc.

The first chapter can be read here. I should point out that this is mainly establishing the situation and that the actual sex does not come until near the end of the chapter (page 2).

I'm currently working on chapter two and that does have more sex in it. It will mainly cover domination.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=469491

 

[Darkniciad]

This one may be a little difficult to sell. Nearly every element of the story that you've described narrows the potential audience a little more. Furry, hermaphrodite, creating your own set of pronouns... Any of those could be deal breakers for a lot of readers.

That's not to say that there's anything wrong with it. I'm just saying that it may very well be that you won't get much feedback in the form of comments or votes, and you should be ready for that.

 

[Dominique1]

This one may be a little difficult to sell. Nearly every element of the story that you've described narrows the potential audience a little more. Furry, hermaphrodite, creating your own set of pronouns... Any of those could be deal breakers for a lot of readers.

That's not to say that there's anything wrong with it. I'm just saying that it may very well be that you won't get much feedback in the form of comments or votes, and you should be ready for that.

I understand. I mean technically speaking it is not furry - these are not anthropomorphic animals, but catgirls which are different, but I understand some might have trouble with the grammar I am using.

 

[Darkniciad]

I understand. I mean technically speaking it is not furry - these are not anthropomorphic animals, but catgirls which are different, but I understand some might have trouble with the grammar I am using.

Most people won't make the distinction

The odd thing is, turn them into werecats, and they sell like hotcakes. The same person who will turn up his or her nose at any other form of animal/human trait crossing will swoon for that "were" suffix.