Ghost of a Chance

[mia_erotica]

Ghost of a Chance is my 6th contest entry, 6th story on Lit. Most of the reads happened in the first 24 hours so I'm actively seeking more readers. It's a Valentine's Day story about a girl and a ghost.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=460034

 

[elfin_odalisque]

As you've pinched a title of one of my stories, I had to go and RVC.

I enjoyed it. You have a deft touch in going completely OTT and taking us with you.

Just a point, I thought you lost your momentum a bit with the conclusion. Still, great stuff and good luck.

Elle

 

[jeanvaljean23]

i loved it... excellent work there dude... i'll be waiting for more from ya.... best of luck...

 

[Jaymal]

You know I loved it...

...but it's worth saying again. Totally original and totally Mia.

Mine should be posted any time by the way...

 

[mia_erotica]

As you've pinched a title of one of my stories, I had to go and RVC.

I enjoyed it. You have a deft touch in going completely OTT and taking us with you.

Just a point, I thought you lost your momentum a bit with the conclusion. Still, great stuff and good luck.

Elle

Thanks Elle. I searched the stories on Lit for one w/ that title before I chose it but none came up. Turns out it is a popular title. Darkniciad also has a story called Ghost of a Chance. I feel like I'm in great company.

 

[mia_erotica]

i loved it... excellent work there dude... i'll be waiting for more from ya.... best of luck...

Thanks so much!

 

[mia_erotica]

sharing the love

...but it's worth saying again. Totally original and totally Mia.

Mine should be posted any time by the way...

Thanks Jaymal. Right back at you.

 

[mia_erotica]

cold temps

My story takes place Feb. 12-14, 2010. When I wrote it, NY was experiencing a very frigid weekend. So I wrote a line about it being one of the coldest winters. Then last week it was really warm. All snow melted. But this morning it was -17 in Watertown. Hopefully my story will make sense in two weeks (and it will still be cold). It's really hard to set a story in a real place in a real time in the future!

 

[mia_erotica]

Love bump

 

[mia_erotica]

lots of love

Thank you all for your support during the Valentine's Day contest. Thanks to those of you who favorited Ghost of a Chance and to those leaving comments and sending private messages and emails. I really appreciate all the kind words. Thanks for sharing the love!

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Thank you all for your support during the Valentine's Day contest. Thanks to those of you who favorited Ghost of a Chance and to those leaving comments and sending private messages and emails. I really appreciate all the kind words. Thanks for sharing the love!

mia, you deserved it, congratulations.

 

[mia_erotica]

gratitude

Thanks Elle.

 

[foxxxyvixxxen]

Congrats!!! U Deserve It But.....................

CONGRATS MIA_EROTICA!!! Ur story was AWESOME!!!

EROTIC PEN IF U'RE READING THIS CONGRATS 2 U 2!!!

BUT!!!!!! Transverse...sorry hon I didn't understand your story enough to win. I'm not hatin I'm just sayin I thought there were other stories IF NOT MINE that were a little bit better to comprehend than yours. *I'm still mad my dumb ass typed in the WRONG STATE!!! I smoke too much *smh* LOL!!!

I know I'm new here and OBVIOUSLY nobody gives a shit about my posting on here which I think is TOTALLY CHILDISH AS HELL CONSIDERING I'M NEW AND SHOULD BE GIVEN A BETTER WELCOME THAN I HAVE BEEN GETTING...but congrats to u too I guess.

 

[mia_erotica]

contest rollercoaster

Thanks foxxxy. I'm coming up on my one year anniversary on Lit and I've only written stories for the contests. My summer contest entry - Putting the Madge in Danna - was my longest story. I received positive emails from everyone who voted. It still only has 18 votes. But I cherish those 18, you know? I came in last in that contest because I didn't qualify. Of course, I was disappointed but then I wrote the halloween story and I got excited again. The people here have helped me to become a better writer and now I'm going to have a novel published. I'm not sure that would have happened had I not had so much positive reinforcement.

Publicly bashing another person's story, however, because you're disappointed w/ results is not such a good idea. Just like you other people worked hard on their stories and had the same aspirations to win. Best of luck to you.

Mia