Derrick Gains (and the crap he goes through)

[CopperSkink]

After being bitched at for being an editor without any submissions, I threw together a completely new series to test the waters while I get my old stuff ready (been stewing the last three years; give it five or so more).

So far the only feedback from anonymous has been that anything labled "incest" is in fact disguised as pedophilia. Unfortunately that doesn't tell me whether my writing is any good or not, so I leave it in your hands.

Yes, I already know the ending of party number two sucked; and yes, I know I can't spell to save my life; and yes, I know the italics are completely screwed up in the first chapter.

Other than that, do your damndest.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1115115&page=submissions

 

[Epmd607]

After being bitched at for being an editor without any submissions, I threw together a completely new series to test the waters while I get my old stuff ready (been stewing the last three years; give it five or so more).

So far the only feedback from anonymous has been that anything labled "incest" is in fact disguised as pedophilia. Unfortunately that doesn't tell me whether my writing is any good or not, so I leave it in your hands.

Yes, I already know the ending of party number two sucked; and yes, I know I can't spell to save my life; and yes, I know the italics are completely screwed up in the first chapter.

Other than that, do your damndest.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1115115&page=submissions

You can't spell to save your life? Use one of the many programs that will check your spelling and grammar for you. It's cool you want to volunteer your time to edit and help someone else out, but if you don't know how to check spelling or how to get italics to show up right on Literotica... I actually saw your story on the New Stories page yesterday and said to myself, "CopperSkink has a story?" But I don't think I ever 'bitched' about it. I'm interested in the all incest = pedophilia, I've never heard that one before. What do you think that person meant by it?

 

[Guest]

After being bitched at for being an editor without any submissions, I threw together a completely new series to test the waters while I get my old stuff ready (been stewing the last three years; give it five or so more).

So far the only feedback from anonymous has been that anything labled "incest" is in fact disguised as pedophilia. Unfortunately that doesn't tell me whether my writing is any good or not, so I leave it in your hands.

Yes, I already know the ending of party number two sucked; and yes, I know I can't spell to save my life; and yes, I know the italics are completely screwed up in the first chapter.

Other than that, do your damndest.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1115115&page=submissions

I enjoyed it.

I found some errors, but hey, mine are full of them. There was a lot of tension and there was a lot of buildup but it was a great release. And, personally, while not a fan of the narrative style, the side comments sprinkled through it made me laugh. And genuinely making me laugh is not easy.

I'm going to go on to part two in the morning

Plus, I already know that she's eighteen. The censors approved it and the disclaimer at the top says so. I know its not pedophilia.

 

[CopperSkink]

Not even that. Part one of the first chapter, that's where the underage question popped up. But my new pet squid that keeps shouting "pedophilia", he only shows up on my stories that made it into the incest category.

I think he's a bit upset, my new pet squid. He doesn't like incest, and if he says it's the same as pedophilia then I'll recognize the error of my ways and get back to writing man and wife spending quality time in their own bed.