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Saiyaman

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New erotic comic FINISHED: I trust you.

Well it has been quiet on my side but that's because i had plenty of other projects that demanded my attention.

Anyway, I finally have something Daria related going called "I trust you"

The objective is this, Daria is crashing at a party at the Lane household when a troubled thing of her past comes to mind and she needs a listening ear and a helping hand to deal with it. But who can she tell about what's bothering her, who can she trust to keep it to themselves?

The answer might be much simpler than she thought.

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That's actually very good Saiyaman, there's a very plausible mix of sex and conflict, did you write this?

The shading is fine, if anything I might back down on the intensity of the color a tad, a little more washed out not Quite so day-glo. Maybe it's just me but I find too intense coloring distracting.
 
xssve said:
That's actually very good Saiyaman, there's a very plausible mix of sex and conflict, did you write this?
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Yup the story is all mine.
All of my stories have a female lead character and I always try to combine sex with real plots and humorous situations.

xssve said:
The shading is fine, if anything I might back down on the intensity of the color a tad, a little more washed out not Quite so day-glo. Maybe it's just me but I find too intense coloring distracting.
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It's difficult to get the color right. But I'll get better eventually.
 
The story is very stimulating. Can't wait to see how dirty it'll get! ;)

I would take the yellow out of the monologue boxes and make them white so that the color doesn't clash with the vibrancy of the color art it overlays upon.
 
Looks better without the Yellow background in the dialogue boxes, although the colors still look oversaturated to me.
 
If were you, I'd drop the animu style. The coloring and the shading are fine, but if I were drawing this, I wouldn't use that art style.

Also, get rid of the Comic Sans. There's no reason for that kind of a thing.
 
Takashi said:
If were you, I'd drop the animu style. The coloring and the shading are fine, but if I were drawing this, I wouldn't use that art style.

Also, get rid of the Comic Sans. There's no reason for that kind of a thing.
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Kinda strange to hear that from somebody called "Takashi"

Anyway, anime style is just what works for me the best and that's why I stick with it.
 
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