the motel...

[subslutt_for_cock]

u call me at work & tell me too meet u at this shady motel by ur job.....u command me to wear nothing but thigh highs & a shelf bra....all black, with black heels & a trench coat.......red whore lips, nails & toes........hair all wild & curly......u'll b at the bar at 5 o'clock.....i walk in...heads turns....but u dont...u kno im coming.....but u dont look at me.....u watch in the mirror behind the bar as all the guys in the place turn to stare at me........i sit next to u...order a drink.....u smell my hair, my perfume.......its familiar & soooo intoxicating......i slip my hand onto ur thigh....u still dont turn....i rub my tits onto ur arm......every-1 in the bar is watchin us.......u slowly put ur arm around me...claiming possession....so every-1 in the bar knows im yours........u rub my ass first......squeezing each cheek......run ur hand up my back..into my hair....so soft, my smell makin ur head spin....grab the back of my neck...pull me into ur lips....kiss me long...deep........a small moan escapes my lips...u open my coat slide ur hand inside to pinch each nipple.....whisper in my ear...u ready to b used tonite cunt.....i moan....we leave the bar, get into the elevator....u blindfold me take my hand....lead me down the hallway......we stop, u knock, the door opens....every-1 becomes silent as we walk in.....ur behind me.....u can feel me tremble...u whisper in my ear....dont worry baby, Daddy's gonna take care of u......i take a deep breath & relax.....u open my coat....take it off....u say out loud....ok gentlemen, this is the whore for this evening......still behind me u start rubbin ur hands all over my body.....i lean back into u...lettin u turn me on.....spread my legs...put my arms behind my back....feel for ur hard dick.....ok guys, u say...shes here to fuck & suck all ur cocks....I open ur pants take it out, stroke it....rub it against my ass cheeks....as u rub my clit....u lower me down onto my knees.....position urself behind me....slide ur cock in my ass, gently....i take a deep breath...u whisper, thats it cunt....take it inside u....open ur legs for Daddy....b a good girl......mmmm....now open ur mouth....stick ur tongue out.....u tell me softly....a part of my body will be inside ur body the entire time u act like Daddy's whore...understand cunt? Yessss, i understand Daddy.....good now suck those cocks.......& one by one i lick & suck each cock...i count 5 in total.......the whole time im impaled on ur rock hard cock.....when they've had their fill....u push me off u...lift me up....walk me over, lay me down on the bed.....u announce....ok boys...her pussy is now open for service, help urselves......u put my head in ur lap...& tell me to take ur hard cock in my mouth but i can only suck on it if im cumming.....they all use my pussy....ruff, hard....hands, fingers, cocks....lips, tongues.....fists....& each time i cum...i suck ur cock...makin it harder & harder.......when im thoroughly used u pick me up, im exhausted...u carry me over to a chair...u sit in it.....position me facing u......slide ur throbbing cock inside my wet, aching pussy....u spread my ass cheeks wide....& say...now her ass....use it good..........& as im impaled with ur cock inside my pussy they each take their turn fuckin, licking, fingering my asshole.....u kiss me...tell me how beautiful i look...what a good whore i am for u.....u suck my tits...bite my nipples.......i throw my head back as i cum repeatedly......when they're all done....im covered in cum.....they leave....its just us...ur still inside me.....u take off my blindfold look into my eyes & begin to make the most passionate beautiful love to me ever of my entire life.........so soft...so slow....kissing.....touching....i feel ur rock hard cock inside my soakin cunt.....im gonna cum ur gonna cum....we explode with exquisite pleasure into each other, onto each other, ur tongue in my mouth my tongue in urs.......breathless....sweaty.....shaking....i whisper....i love you.....

 

[Scotsman69]

interesting but unarousing. I'll stick with my lover. Bye.

 

[HotSouthernGuy]

wow now that sounds like quite the night babe

 

[niv78]

interesting but unarousing. I'll stick with my lover. Bye.

Why even post if you're just going to sound like an ass?

 

[trisquel_astur]

A good beginning, honey!

Welcome to our funny dungeon!

 

[Cattypuss]

It must be my age telling on me: text-typing, lack of meaningful punctuation and lack of paragraphing meant that I read one line before thinking "Sod this - life's too short".

 

[StrayKat]

It must be my age telling on me: text-typing, lack of meaningful punctuation and lack of paragraphing meant that I read one line before thinking "Sod this - life's too short".

Seconded.

 

[Sir_Winston54]

It must be my age telling on me: text-typing, lack of meaningful punctuation and lack of paragraphing meant that I read one line before thinking "Sod this - life's too short".

Seconded.

Third.

 

[sinnocence]

I think I've just been period raped.

 

[00Syd]

Use some motherfucking puntuation, will 'ya? I would never subject myself to reading such a mess.

 

[insert____here]

awww, be nice.

on technicality, i agree it's not great, but it's porn so who really pays attention to the literary niceties anyway?? that's like saying people watch porn movies for the plot. the visuals were interesting in their own way and i have to give her kudos for the effort.

 

[00Syd]

awww, be nice.

on technicality, i agree it's not great, but it's porn so who really pays attention to the literary niceties anyway?? that's like saying people watch porn movies for the plot. the visuals were interesting in their own way and i have to give her kudos for the effort.

I pay attention to the "literary niceties" (Such as grammar, spelling, punctuation; you know, the fundamentals of written language) when I'm reading something, because when one completely throws them out the window, it becomes a horribly difficult to read mess that I have absolutely no desire to try to decipher into readable prose.

 

[ecstaticsub]

I couldn't get past the first "u"

Too bad, it may have been fun to read.

 

[Cattypuss]

Maybe someone should set up a parallel site called Illiterotica.

 

[MisterSir]

I'd post with more vitriol, but I'm currently struggling for life, having been crushed by that ginormic wall of text.

on technicality, i agree it's not great, but it's porn so who really pays attention to the literary niceties anyway?? that's like saying people watch porn movies for the plot. the visuals were interesting in their own way and i have to give her kudos for the effort.

The point that grammar, spelling and punctuation are less "niceties" than they are the building blocks of the entire language has been stated already, so let me build on that by pointing out that if that were a porno movie, the shitty everything would translate to something like the video and audio quality rather than the plot; the plot, put in this literary context, would be the use of a greater vocabulary - nice to see but ultimately not needed as you can get by with the minimum.

 

[sb2009]

it does remind me of texts from my 12 year old

"mom wre r u i am lte fr prcts" etc

 

[StrayKat]

English is my second (third?) language. I cant even read properly written posts without a dictionary sometimes. This kind of crap-talk they didnt teach us in school.
Now if somebody was butchering Croatian I would get into my grammar Nazi mood. I dont feel competent here.

 

[sb2009]

Hey StrayKat..when my husband was in Croatia there were these cleaning women that knocked on thier doors in the morning and said something that he assumed was "houskeeping" but he swears it sounded like "cocks for sale" and, because he's 12 in his head, still giggles whenever we are at a hotel and he hears "housekeeping."

 

[Lady_Fiona]

I've gone bloody cross eyed....

 

[StrayKat]

Hey StrayKat..when my husband was in Croatia there were these cleaning women that knocked on thier doors in the morning and said something that he assumed was "houskeeping" but he swears it sounded like "cocks for sale" and, because he's 12 in his head, still giggles whenever we are at a hotel and he hears "housekeeping."

Hmmm, housekeeping would be something like "domaćica" or "čistaćica" (I cant tell how you will see these letters) but I wouldnt say any of that sounds like cock.
But then for 12 yo everything sounds like cock or pussy

 

[sb2009]

yes, and considering it was a year of away from me, he probably was hearing "pussy" and "cock" everywhere!

 

[StrayKat]

yes, and considering it was a year of away from me, he probably was hearing "pussy" and "cock" everywhere!

Lol poor boy
Where exactly in Croatia was he btw? I come from the middle of the coast.

 

[sb2009]

i'll have to ask..it was like 10 years ago? our oldest was little little...so mabye 11 years ago? he might not even remember but he might...

 

[StrayKat]

i'll have to ask..it was like 10 years ago? our oldest was little little...so mabye 11 years ago? he might not even remember but he might...

The war was 1991.-1995. though the nasty situation started somewhat earlier. I remember 1990. taking one of the last flights back home from the capital since the road between North and South was already unsafe.
I cant really recall when the foreign forces came over the first time.

 

[sb2009]

he went with a small NATO contingent..he was repairing electral equipment...I don't think they were actually shooting at the time...