whalee
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Not that I'm immune to the incandescent eroticism of these pictures (especially the last three), but I had maybe an insight about something that makes Jennifer's writing so powerful. It's that she notices details that others often don't. Her professor and she are walking inside, and she writes "I think we were probably both stuck in our own little world of what next."
I'd only point out how VIVID that image is, and how truthful. I also admire the language - do you notice the momentum of that sentence? It's so rythmical (sp?) it conveys them walking.
I know, too geeky, right? But it's just this kind of stuff that makes writing come alive, not to mention her virtuosity with pacing and dialogue.
And then there are those photos.......
all very true