I need a script for the first time being DOM

[henry0reilly]

In past relationships I have been manipulative and abusive. I have learned to recognize that behavior and nip it in the bud but the issues that generate it are unresolved.

My g/f has been a very good dominatrix for me (4 sessions) and now it's time to switch and I'm afraid I might like spanking her for the wrong reasons, so I need a script. Does this make sense to anyone else?

 

[DeepGreenEyes]

Hmmmm...is it possible to spank her for the wrong reasons?

 

[Netzach]

In past relationships I have been manipulative and abusive. I have learned to recognize that behavior and nip it in the bud but the issues that generate it are unresolved.

My g/f has been a very good dominatrix for me (4 sessions) and now it's time to switch and I'm afraid I might like spanking her for the wrong reasons, so I need a script. Does this make sense to anyone else?

No, you don't need a script. You need to feel like the issues are at least semi-resolved enough to know that you're not doing it for the wrong reasons.

 

[MisterSir]

Script? Dude, BDSM don't work like that. What exactly are the reasons you're afraid you might like spanking her for? 'Cause if it's that you might like causing pain, join the fucking club, it just means you got a sadistic streak in you.

 

[henry0reilly]

Thanks for the replys so far, but I'm still hoping someone will understand my point.

It worked out ok. I gave the naughty girl 25 whacks for peeking at me in the shower, then fucked her with her dildo and ordered her to play with herself while I did it. She came over and over again.

She has not given me any feedback, so I'm not sure if that's a good sign or not. I thanked her repeatedly after she took my ass cherry.

 

[ZRT]

Now let's not rush to judgment here, Netz, MS.

Okay, I've got your opening bit here.

***
Scene: Subway station, late at night. Nobody else around. (We can't afford extras right now.)

Her: "I'm LEAVING YOU, Romeo!"

Him: "YOU BITCH!"

Lead male actor slaps the shit out of the female lead. Female lead falls over and whimpers a lot. Male lead gives some light kicking to the ribs, to drive home the point. (Of his boot.)

You: "I'll teach you to leave me!"

Male lead hauls female lead down to the tracks and ties her to the track. (Carefully avoiding the third rail, as well as Social Security.)

Female lead comes around.

Her: "OMG WTF Romeo?"

Him: "Until you say you love me, I'm leaving you on these tracks, bitch! Soon there will be nipple torture and possibly grizzly death!"

Her: "Hm. Bears?"

Him: "Here come the clamps, baby!"

Male lead rips open female lead's flimsy blouse and totally clamps onto her nipples with some of those black office paperclips.

(Hey, we're still on a budget here.)

Her: "Ow. Ow. It stings and burns."

Him: "Suffer, bitch!"

Her: "Oh! You are so strong and dominant, you make my caverns moist!"

Him: "YEAH! That's what I'm talking about!"

Train rumbles in the distance, a steam whistle honking loudly.

Her: "I submit to you, Romeo! May you never leave me!"

Him: "Fuck yes! Take it in the ass, bitch!"

Train light shines upon the duo.

Her: "Uh, Romeo, fun and stuff, but, y'know, train?"

Him: "Wait! There's still the next part, where I show my true power and sadism!"

Male lead extends his arms out perpendicular to his body.

Him: "Thanks for the welcome, folks. I just flew in from Cleveland, and boy are my arms TIRED."

Fade to black, with the sounds of shrieking metal and a steam whistle honking.

 

[DeepGreenEyes]

Now let's not rush to judgment here, Netz, MS.

Okay, I've got your opening bit here.

This is brilliant.

After a $50 million debut at the box office in its first weekend, we can ditch the paper clips.

Hmmm...who would you hire for the parts on a shoestring budget? And who would you hire if you had some real money?

 

[ZRT]

This is brilliant.

After a $50 million debut at the box office in its first weekend, we can ditch the paper clips.

Hmmm...who would you hire for the parts on a shoestring budget? And who would you hire if you had some real money?

On a shoestring budget, I'd have to be the lead male role as well as the director, I guess. That semester of drama class in high school will finally pay off.

Now for the real show... Daniel Craig would ensure repeat viewings from MisterSir, so he's a go. Besides, he could really hit the 'possibly grizzly death' line to a T.

And it's never a bad time to see the heaving bosoms of Jennifer Connally, right?

 

[ZRT]

On a real budget, I won't have to make the train sound effect by putting my hand over the microphone and going 'chugchugchug', too.

Pretty awesome to think about. Do we have any multi-gazillionaire investors posting here? 'Cause this script is the real deal.

 

[Etoile]

And here I was just thinking Much Ado would work...

 

[ZRT]

And here I was just thinking Much Ado would work...

Psh. The only reason you're getting a debut night seat at the theater is because I'm fond of you.

 

[neci]

On a shoestring budget, I'd have to be the lead male role as well as the director, I guess. That semester of drama class in high school will finally pay off.

Now for the real show... Daniel Craig would ensure repeat viewings from MisterSir, so he's a go. Besides, he could really hit the 'possibly grizzly death' line to a T.

And it's never a bad time to see the heaving bosoms of Jennifer Connelly, right?

this is good.... *runs to netflix to check on Daniel Craig movies for um... late night fun - and miss connelly's tits... well fuck*

On a real budget, I won't have to make the train sound effect by putting my hand over the microphone and going 'chugchugchug', too.

Pretty awesome to think about. Do we have any multi-gazillionaire investors posting here? 'Cause this script is the real deal.

i have a wooden train whistle i can donate to the cause!!!!

 

[Mister_Wikk]

On a real budget, I won't have to make the train sound effect by putting my hand over the microphone and going 'chugchugchug', too.

Pretty awesome to think about. Do we have any multi-gazillionaire investors posting here? 'Cause this script is the real deal.

Where's the dastardly twisting of the moustache?

 

[Cattypuss]

Her: "Oh! You are so strong and dominant, you make my caverns moist!"

I am soooooooooooooo gonna use that next time

 

[YourCaptor]

Whats that Syd movie again...

Beyond the valley of the dolls!

Use the lines of Z-Man.

Should go something like this, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GBzAcmHvS8o

Yup, that be true bondaging their.

 

[00Syd]

Whats that Syd movie again...

Beyond the valley of the dolls!

Use the lines of Z-Man.

Should go something like this, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GBzAcmHvS8o

Yup, that be true bondaging their.

HAHA. That is one of my favorite movies. I'd love to meet Z-man. I'd let him tie me up.

 

[ZRT]

Where's the dastardly twisting of the moustache?

Please. I am an artiste and eschew trite cliches.

"But Z!" you protest, in your Philistinic way. "What about the train tracks?"

And I answer "They were subway tracks, not train tracks. Philistine." Then I sniff haughtily.

For having only been a major motion picture writer/director/actor/best boy grip (best job title ever) for a day, I've picked up a lot of the mannerisms.

 

[tigressnred]

Dearest Henry,

If you want to know how she feels about it ask her. The most important thing in any realtionship D/s or otherwise is still communication.

The lifestyle is #1 built on respect, followed closely by honesty and communication.

Hope that is helpful at all......Luvs xxx Tigress

 

[jenniferbaby]

Him: "Fuck yes! Take it in the ass, bitch!"

I laughed throughout, but I found this line to be the funniest of the lot. I think it's the exclamation marks that do it.

 

[DeepGreenEyes]

For having only been a major motion picture writer/director/actor/best boy grip (best job title ever) for a day, I've picked up a lot of the mannerisms.

Weren't you also "Man in Baseball Cap No. 3"? I thought he looked like you.

My favorite part was when Daniel Craig narrowed his eyes and said:

"Look around, slut...you're taking a long, painful ride on the sub-way!!"

 

[ZRT]

"Look around, slut...you're taking a long, painful ride on the sub-way!!"

...I so wish I'd come up with that line.

That is awesome embodied right there.

 

[DeepGreenEyes]

...I so wish I'd come up with that line.

That is awesome embodied right there.

You can use it, but I want a credit: maybe the Dolly Grip? I see that one in film credits a lot.

Also, I want an assistant named Dolly.

 

[ImOnIt]

Use the script from the thatre. Doesn't matter which - i recommend Phantom of the Opera. CHRISTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE *crescendo*

Pretty sure you can't go wrong with that/