I Need Some Help

[The_Rabbi]

I need someone to help me with my story. I've never written one before. Actually I have I've just never finished one.
I wrote a story that needs work.
If someone wants to fix it up or rewrite I would be OK with that or if anybody just wants to give me feedback. I'd be very grateful.

 

[amber03]

I need someone to help me with my story. I've never written one before. Actually I have I've just never finished one.
I wrote a story that needs work.
If someone wants to fix it up or rewrite I would be OK with that or if anybody just wants to give me feedback. I'd be very grateful.

Hi The_Rabbi

I'd be happy to take a look at it and offer some feedback, (I'm not into "fixing up" or "rewriting" other peoples work though) but we really do need you to post a link to the story - has it been published on Lit yet?

Also, please let us know what genre it is / what category it is posted in.



Amber
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[hotsnatch6]

I need someone to help me with my story. I've never written one before. Actually I have I've just never finished one.
I wrote a story that needs work.
If someone wants to fix it up or rewrite I would be OK with that or if anybody just wants to give me feedback. I'd be very grateful.

Do you plan to post it somewhere so we can have a look?

 

[The_Rabbi]

I haven't posted it yet. I don't think it's ready. But I can send it via PM. I've sent one to each of you.
The Genre is Erotic couplings.

 

[Anastacya]

I would be happy to take a look.

I have written several stories myself, and finished few, so I can relate. In addition, I have an English background, so I can edit, as you would like.

 

[hotsnatch6]

I haven't posted it yet. I don't think it's ready. But I can send it via PM. I've sent one to each of you.
The Genre is Erotic couplings.

I got it and I enjoyed it. Do you want feedback, corrections or editing, or just to share it?

 

[The_Rabbi]

I got it and I enjoyed it. Do you want feedback, corrections or editing, or just to share it?

Thanks, Hot

Feedback (honest, constructive), corrections, editing if you would.

 

[amber03]

I read it

It has a good basis for a story, and is quite well written but I do think that it needs heavily editing. I'm not an editor so couldn't help out there I'm afraid.

I think once edited, then you should post it, as it's definitely good enough.

Thanks for sharing it and the very best of luck.

Amber
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(By the way... not all Amber's are strippers ;-) )