help me write my first story

[LusciousLoralie]

how does she proposition him?
when will he stop denying that he wants her?

plus these ones for both characters
Talents:
Extremely skilled at:
Extremely unskilled at:
Good characteristics:
Mannerisms:
Peculiarities:
Biggest regret:
Minor regrets:
Biggest accomplishment:
Minor accomplishments:
Character's darkest secret:

 

[geronimo_appleby]

what color is her nail polish?
what type of car does he drive?
why is she so shy at school?
why did his ex-wife cheat on him?
how does she proposition him?
when will he stop denying that he wants her?

are we set in the US for this?

 

[LusciousLoralie]

are we set in the US for this?

yes, why?

 

[SimonBrooke]

what color is her nail polish?

Bright Green

what type of car does he drive?

a diesel van (he looked a bit like Che Guevara)

why is she so shy at school?

If you put your hand upon her thigh she'd hit you with a rule

why did his ex-wife cheat on him?

when you're not you're with some underworld spy or the wife of a close friend...

how does she proposition him?

She came in through the bathroom window.

when will he stop denying that he wants her?

When the music's over (turn out the light)

 

[LusciousLoralie]

Bright Green

a diesel van (he looked a bit like Che Guevara)

If you put your hand upon her thigh she'd hit you with a rule

when you're not you're with some underworld spy or the wife of a close friend...

She came in through the bathroom window.

When the music's over (turn out the light)

lol, where did you come up with that?

 

[jomar]

lol, where did you come up with that?

song lyrics

 

[SimonBrooke]

song lyrics

One point to you.

Prize goes to the person who can spot them all.

 

[LusciousLoralie]

One point to you.

Prize goes to the person who can spot them all.

1 - (I don't know but I'm getting something about Simon & Garfunkel)

2 - Panic In Detroit - David Bowie?

3 - You're So Vain - Carly Simon?

4 - Adults Only - Slick Rick?

5 - She Came In Through The Bathroom Window - The Beatles or Joe Cocker?

6 - When The Music's Over - The Doors?

 

[Austin8]

1 - (I don't know but I'm getting something about Simon & Garfunkel)

2 - Panic In Detroit - David Bowie?

3 - You're So Vain - Carly Simon?

4 - Adults Only - Slick Rick?

5 - She Came In Through The Bathroom Window - The Beatles or Joe Cocker?

6 - When The Music's Over - The Doors?

*****
1 Panic in Detroit: Bowie

2 Fire Brigade: Move

3 Your so Vain: Simon/Jagger

4 She came in thru the bathroom window: Beatles // Joe Cocker-Chris Staton

5 ??

 

[jomar]

She came in through the bathroom window. Originally the Beatles - Abbey road.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

She needs to sign up for one of those vanity books where you input your proper nouns and adjectives, and they print you a novel. Lotsa people here do it.

 

[Austin8]

She came in through the bathroom window. Originally the Beatles - Abbey road.

What's that last one?

 

[OhMissScarlett]

She needs...

I thought you were gonna say to just write the story. Damn, you know I drink a shot every time you say that.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

yes, why?

i'm in the UK. just checkin', otherwise some of the cars may be a tad obscure.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I thought you were gonna say to just write the story. Damn, you know I drink a shot every time you say that.

If youre trying to set me up for a disability check, fuhgeddaboutit. My effects on peeps arent covered by any warrantees, guarantees, Biblical Commandments, guilt, or good taste. Think of me like you think of your 401K or Social Security Benefits.

 

[jomar]

What's that last one?

Google said LL was right - The Doors. I didn't recognize it right off.

 

[JericBuckley]

what color is her nail polish?
what type of car does he drive?
why is she so shy at school?
why did his ex-wife cheat on him?
how does she proposition him?
when will he stop denying that he wants her?

These will come to you suddenly. Just stop worrying about these details and start writing it.

 

[SimonBrooke]

Google said LL was right - The Doors. I didn't recognize it right off.

You're all doing well, but I'm surprised no-one got BGNP

No-one going to suggest any alternatives?

 

[jomar]

You're all doing well, but I'm surprised no-one got BGNP

No-one going to suggest any alternatives?

Hmm, not familiar with them.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Think of me like you think of your 401K or Social Security Benefits.

Non-existent, got it.

 

[midwestyankee]

Non-existent, got it.

Lower than low seems to fit as well.

 

[Austin8]

Hmm, not familiar with them.

Oh man, I went back and looked I totally missed it.... kinda hidden....

 

[LusciousLoralie]

She needs to sign up for one of those vanity books where you input your proper nouns and adjectives, and they print you a novel. Lotsa people here do it.

that sounds great

 

[LusciousLoralie]

These will come to you suddenly. Just stop worrying about these details and start writing it.

thank you to the one person that is actually helping

 

[geronimo_appleby]

what color is her nail polish? - nil

what type of car does he drive? - no car, he rides an old triumph thunderbird 650

why is she so shy at school? - she's intimidated by crowds and peer pressure

why did his ex-wife cheat on him? - he worked too hard and she was always a slut. she married him for his mind (infatuation) but grew bored quickly

how does she proposition him? - in the form of notes to begin with; she's too shy to approach him directly. she piques his interest with love notes

when will he stop denying that he wants her? - after he takes her out on the bike and they get drunk on tequila