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[Lithium_hobo]

I've been a long time member of this site (around 2 years I think) and over the course of that I have been submitting (very slowly) my story involving characters from the Marvel universe. As it nears its completion, I understand the oddity of asking for feedback now, but feedback is the muse that keeps me writing so to ensure it doesn't take me another two years to finish this, I'd like to ask for your feedback on the current six chapters, linked below:

Chapter 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=309061
Chapter 2: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=319943
Chapter 3: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354088
Chapter 4: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357329
Chapter 5: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=379828
Chapter 6: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400420
Chapter 7 (NEW): http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=420741

Thanks!

 

[Lithium_hobo]

bump for addition of chapter 7

 

[Pittdude1972]

I read chapter 1. I liked it. Well written narrative.

 

[Lithium_hobo]

I read chapter 1. I liked it. Well written narrative.

Thank you very much.

Sometimes I think, though, that I should have stopped it at the first chapter. >.>

 

[Lithium_hobo]

Bump.