Looking to edit

[rozezwild]

Found this a while back and I wanted to post it...it reminded me of you...not sure who wrote it but... when I caught it in my documents it made me think of you..

Wild Roses

Early in the morning,
I carried bundles of wild Roses,
for you in my arms.
As I passed through the river,
in my way to your home.
The flow of water became so distressing.
My arms lost their grips;
And, so their proficiency.
The Roses were lost to the flow.
The face of the river turned flamboyant,
for sometime .
I watched the Roses passed me by.
But, if you wish to smell the Roses?
Tonight, rest your face on my arms. ​

Preens--- i love it and you

 

[rozezwild]

Hey there. Are you still interested in doing some editing? I only just started writing, of any kind, as such most any kind of feed back from structure, to grammer, to whatever may stick out to you. I am just trying to take what is in my head, and that some have told me they love when I tell them verbally and put them on paper. Or, the screen I guess more like. I have on here I posted before I realized about the ediiting, this is the second I plan on posting. It is a voyer/Ds based story. Here are the first few paragraphs for you.

We are walking through the woods. I am in a bikini and a little white skirt that just skims the bottom of my cheeks. Teva sandals. It is early morning, and still a touch chilly, so you can see my nipples through the fabric of my suit I know this, and have chosen not to wear my sweat shirt. Instead decide to tease you by skipping down the trail, my skirt flipping up; giving you the view you want.

When I spin around and hop my breasts look as tough they may pop out, disappointing you every time they don't. You can see the sparkle in my eyes, knowing you are enjoying the show I am giving you, just waiting to get a bit deeper into the woods before you try to misbehave.

About 15 min into this, we hear a noise in the brush. I being a few paces ahead still run to see what it is, you yelling at me not to disturb the wildlife. Always trying to protect me from my curiosity.

I see well before you what the noise is, another couple, enjoying the peaceful quiet of the clearing. His head buried deep between her legs, both of them naked.
I am entranced watching them, and don’t notice you’re behind me until your arms come up around me, gently cupping my breasts through the fabric of my suit.
The beading on my left breast teasing my nipple.

nice-- needs a little work -- before i say yes -- ask my writer Syn that posts with me here if you can handle how BLUNT i am

 

[Sinful_whispers]

MMMMMMMMMM gimme some more snugglies
I am ok just kinda feeling icky tonight -- head aches and body is not far behind
I love you anyway that you are and you know it-- sane or insane -- i kinda like the insane side

It sounds like you have what's going around...I do hope you feel better soon..I miss ya heaps...

Yea, I know you love me reguardless

I do as well the insane side keeps me sane

RAWR!!

 

[Sinful_whispers]

nice-- needs a little work -- before i say yes -- ask my writer Syn that posts with me here if you can handle how BLUNT i am

LOL...

Hello Chimel..

I can say the first time Roze edited for me I REALLY didn't like her after that! I looked at all I had to correct and just wanted to cry...it was so bad.

BUT...that was stories ago, she made me look for my mistakes and correct them by re-reading and paying attention to what she corrected previously and for that I absolutely love the woman to death...

I didn't write for over two years and tossed a short one at her and I was scared I was going to get back a shitload of corrections..BUT...I didn't...whew!

IF you can take criticism...then toss it to Mz. Roze...if you can't then don't...she can be brutal .... and since I like brutality... I'd not exchange her for another editor

 

[Moralez18PT]

Just trying to get a feel of things around here, is this thread the "current conversation" thread?

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Just trying to get a feel of things around here, is this thread the "current conversation" thread?

Greetings Moralez...well it's been a conversation thread for a very long time, feel free to join in if you like.

I don't bite unless provoked...or asked to

 

[Moralez18PT]

I don't know if I should feel scared or tempted...
Is "both" acceptable?

 

[Sinful_whispers]

I don't know if I should feel scared or tempted...
Is "both" acceptable?

Hmm...not sure either...perhaps both will work..mood pending.

 

[Moralez18PT]

Why do I have the feeling that I'm going to feel right at home here?

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Why do I have the feeling that I'm going to feel right at home here?

LOL..hmm..not sure... I havent given you the acceptance atomic wedgie yet

 

[Moralez18PT]

Can it be quastion tiem nao?

How long does it usually take for an author to respond to an editor offer?
I've offered myself in four different threads. One was almost immediate, job's done and very well done if I'm allowed to toot my own horn, the other three have been delaying.
I'm a bit impatient btw
How much time should I let pass before giving up on a particular author?

--

How long is considered too long for me to offer?
If a request was posted two weeks ago, is there still time for me to offer my services?
Or should I disregard it as "too old"?

--

And last, what is the preferred method of "applying"?
Answer on the thread? PM the author? both?

Thanks in advance

 

[Moralez18PT]

Just realised how kinky "offering myself" sounds
oh well

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Just realised how kinky "offering myself" sounds
oh well

LOL..I really can't answer that...I'm a writer..the woman who started this thread is my editor...RozeWild.

People she edits for pop on here and chit-chat back and forth...cept me I flirt with the beauty

Maybe start your own edit thread? Wish I could offer more, might want to ask all that in a htread alone and see what you get for replies?

 

[Sinful_whispers]

By the way...I like when another offers themselves to me...

 

[Moralez18PT]

Starting a new thread sounds good... let's see where that gets me
And now I'm afraid of opening my mouth, cuz i'm back in the "unconciously kinky" zone hehe

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Starting a new thread sounds good... let's see where that gets me
And now I'm afraid of opening my mouth, cuz i'm back in the "unconciously kinky" zone hehe

Well..I think you offering yourself out there might be kinky if we add an organ grinding monkey, two kiwi fruits and a candle.

 

[Moralez18PT]

Is it strange that the only thing that I can't imagine what's for is the kiwi fruits?

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Is it strange that the only thing that I can't imagine what's for is the kiwi fruits?

LOL... expand your mind..yes, yes...that's it...now close your eyes and pretend your holding that fuzzy little sweet fruit...

now..whatcha gonna to with it hmm?

 

[Moralez18PT]

Smell it deeply... try to capture all of its essence in one whiff... Touch it, feel it, lick it, taste the flavour of the fuzz, try to guess what the inside might hold... and that's about it because that damn monkey won't stop grinding the blasted organ!

 

[Sinful_whispers]

Smell it deeply... try to capture all of its essence in one whiff... Touch it, feel it, lick it, taste the flavour of the fuzz, try to guess what the inside might hold... and that's about it because that damn monkey won't stop grinding the blasted organ!

LMAO..that was good there at the ending..damn horny monkeys!

 

[Sinful_whispers]

*sneaks in and snuggles my Roze up* I was thinking about chu'...I do hope you feel better tomorrow...

luvers ya heaps N' bunches....

Night!






Night Morazel..was a pleasure 'meeting' you.

 

[Moralez18PT]

"See" you again soon!

 

[rozezwild]

It sounds like you have what's going around...I do hope you feel better soon..I miss ya heaps...

Yea, I know you love me reguardless

I do as well the insane side keeps me sane

RAWR!!

Damn you were a busy little bee when i was gone for a few hours weren't you??

Damn it woman dont you know you are not supposed to flirt with others? They will try and steal you away and then i will have to hurt someone-- well and the mood i am in i will do serious damage

This little Bitch that our Mini Domme was going out with just went and fucked some guy and lied to Mini Domme and Me about where she was and who she was with -- her mom busted her out -- so i was picking up pieces of a broken heart a little bit ago.-- i hate that we cant jsut tell them what they need to know -- they have to learn it-- it kills me to see her cry herself to sleep over some little bitch--

Ok i ranted

anyone wants me to edit if they think that they can handle it needs to Private message me and we will discuss it there

Kisses
Roze

 

[rozezwild]

Greetings Moralez...well it's been a conversation thread for a very long time, feel free to join in if you like.

I don't bite unless provoked...or asked to

Just over 3 years we been talking and i been editing for you

Be nice-- or i will bite-- or maybe find some pony stuff

 

[rozezwild]

LOL..I really can't answer that...I'm a writer..the woman who started this thread is my editor...RozeWild.

People she edits for pop on here and chit-chat back and forth...cept me I flirt with the beauty

Maybe start your own edit thread? Wish I could offer more, might want to ask all that in a htread alone and see what you get for replies?

she "flirts with me?? OH i am going to cry -- i thought you were all mine and that was it--




Goes in her room and pouts