How did this story get approved?

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I won't post the story in its entirety here, but I've noticed over the last couple of days very negative comments about this story:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=411700

It deals with torture and humiliation of a man who is paralyzed from the neck down. What I want to know is how something like this gets approved? I don't normally post here as you can see, but I do read may of the threads and forums here. I've seen many authors complain of their stories being rejected because of too much violence or similar issues.

I warn you before you click the link, if you cannot tolerate cruelty and humiliation, do not read this story. The author has posted a comment on his own story that he thinks it's erotic. No one has agreed with him in the other 45 or so comments he's received.

Is it possible to request the story be removed from Literotica without the author's consent?
 
I don't know the rules on that but the piece is trash and shouldn't be here in my opinion.
 
I don't know the rules on that but the piece is trash and shouldn't be here in my opinion.

I whole-heartedly agree. What were the moderators thinking when they approved that story? Good God! I clicked on the "Report problems with this story" link and reported it as inappropriate, but I don't know what good that'll do.

I couldn't even read the whole thing. What kind of a sick mind would write something like that then think it's erotic?

ETA: Seems this schmuck has other similar stories posted, too. What an ass.
 
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I whole-heartedly agree. What were the moderators thinking when they approved that story? Good God! I clicked on the "Report problems with this story" link and reported it as inappropriate, but I don't know what good that'll do.

I couldn't even read the whole thing. What kind of a sick mind would write something like that then think it's erotic?

ETA: Seems this schmuck has other similar stories posted, too. What an ass.

I didn't look to see if they had other 'trash', though I noticed all the negative comments. One piece of theirs was enough to make me sick.

ETA: I clicked the link as well. Not sure if it will make any difference to add another since you did, but I voiced my opinion.
 
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I didn't look to see if they had other 'trash', though I noticed all the negative comments. One piece of theirs was enough to make me sick.

Oh yeah. I accidentally clicked on his (her?) user name when I was scrolling through the page too fast. I clicked the wheel on my mouse to stop the scrolling and hit dead-on the user name. UGH!

There's gotta be some way to get those stories pulled. That's just beyond.......*shudder*
 
Oh yeah. I accidentally clicked on his (her?) user name when I was scrolling through the page too fast. I clicked the wheel on my mouse to stop the scrolling and hit dead-on the user name. UGH!

There's gotta be some way to get those stories pulled. That's just beyond.......*shudder*

PM's to Laurel help you think?
 
wrong category perhaps...

While the story is certainly in the wrong category ( Exhibitionist & Voyeur) and probably should have had a warning posted by the author as a special note, it should be remembered that LITEROTICA does have categories called NONCONSENT and BDSM.

With some 25,000 stories in them!

This story is in no way extreme compared to others that appear regularily here. And our publishing worlds best seller lists are peppered by Serial Killer tales that invariably entail all sorts of evil sadists.

It may not be your cup of tea (or mine) but ban it? I think not.
 
It's certainly in the wrong category. I'm rather surprised that it didn't run afoul of the rape fantasy vs. rapist fantasy prohibition.

Beyond that, though, with only a little bit of tweaking, I can see this as an erotic horror story. As much as I hate to agree with scouries under any conditions, I've seen worse. Hell, I've written worse. If you think this is bad, stay away from my horror tales, Ebon Genesis, and the first several chapters of Danica.

It's twisted, it's not my cup of tea, and it certainly isn't an E/V story, but I think calling to ban it may be a bit off base. Up to further review by the moderators whether it's over the line on the rape/rapist fantasy thing. If it was my call, I'd say it's over the line.
 
It got published because literotten has a bunch of

Brits as moderators and I will bet anything that a British writer scribbled this Beside it has all the qualifications of a Lieterotten wimp degrade/ humility stories which all the moderators just love because they are British wimp writers themselves and love for their characters to be humiliated just like they were when they were little malformed retarded children fathered by a brother and sister who were fathered by a father and daughter who were fathered by a big dog getting sick and throwing up
 
Well, whadda ya know. I've never seen one in the wild. Truly fascinating.

Somebody forgot to close a gate somewhere *laugh*
 
Well, whadda ya know. I've never seen one in the wild. Truly fascinating.

Somebody forgot to close a gate somewhere *laugh*

I've never had my belief in the freedom of speech tested like it has since I found this place and started posting. Was all so much easier as a theory. *laugh*
 
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The story has been flipped back to me, so I guess they listened to you guys. Fair enough. I've edited to take out the hard stuff and I've also changed the category to Non Consent. Trivial point but a new title too!

Hope we're cool now.
 
I don't know the rules on that but the piece is trash and shouldn't be here in my opinion.

While I agree 100% that it's trash, if they took down everything that was offensive to someone or let's face it, just poorly written, 80% of the stories on the site would be gone.

I say let it sit and get ripped apart in the comments. It's more Just and it's funnier, too.
 
While I agree 100% that it's trash, if they took down everything that was offensive to someone or let's face it, just poorly written, 80% of the stories on the site would be gone.

I say let it sit and get ripped apart in the comments. It's more Just and it's funnier, too.

That may be, but in my opinion, it went beyond what the NonCon category is, even though it wasn't posted there. Trying to kill a helpless man and enjoying it? Nothing funny there at all.
 
That may be, but in my opinion, it went beyond what the NonCon category is, even though it wasn't posted there. Trying to kill a helpless man and enjoying it? Nothing funny there at all.

That's what my whole beef with the story was. I can understand there are readers who like the humiliation stories, but that one went far beyond that. The man being humiliated was completely paralyzed from the neck down and his wife and her lover nearly killed him. It was tasteless. I'm glad it was pulled.
 
While the story is certainly in the wrong category ( Exhibitionist & Voyeur) and probably should have had a warning posted by the author as a special note, it should be remembered that LITEROTICA does have categories called NONCONSENT and BDSM.

With some 25,000 stories in them!

This story is in no way extreme compared to others that appear regularily here. And our publishing worlds best seller lists are peppered by Serial Killer tales that invariably entail all sorts of evil sadists.

It may not be your cup of tea (or mine) but ban it? I think not.
Such super disgusto crap is still free speech. It may even belong in the non erotic section. But I agree... it should not be banned.

We start a perilous journey down a slippery slope if we go there.
 
The story has been flipped back to me, so I guess they listened to you guys. Fair enough. I've edited to take out the hard stuff and I've also changed the category to Non Consent. Trivial point but a new title too!

Hope we're cool now.

Your post was very gracious. Thanks for taking the high road on this.
 
That may be, but in my opinion, it went beyond what the NonCon category is, even though it wasn't posted there. Trying to kill a helpless man and enjoying it? Nothing funny there at all.

I agree with you 100%. However, even if every last person on the planet disagrees with it and is disgusted by it--we still don't have a legitimate *right* to stop him/her from writing or saying it.

I think the best thing you can do is let it stand and let the audience say their piece if they so choose, and let them ignore it if that's also their choice.
 
A couple of posts here on free speech. This is a privately owned Web site. The concept of free speech does not apply here.
 
A couple of posts here on free speech. This is a privately owned Web site. The concept of free speech does not apply here.

no, it doesn't have to, that's a fact. However, it would still be the wisest option, in spite of the protestations of a few control freaks who can't handle the idea of people disagreeing with them.
 
The story has been flipped back to me, so I guess they listened to you guys. Fair enough. I've edited to take out the hard stuff and I've also changed the category to Non Consent. Trivial point but a new title too!

Hope we're cool now.


no, it doesn't have to, that's a fact. However, it would still be the wisest option, in spite of the protestations of a few control freaks who can't handle the idea of people disagreeing with them.

You can see from their post that the author edited the original piece. They aren't continuing on with the issue.

Why are you?
 
no, it doesn't have to, that's a fact. However, it would still be the wisest option, in spite of the protestations of a few control freaks who can't handle the idea of people disagreeing with them.
Can someone please direct Propeller Boy to all the FREE SPEECH memes that can be found on this website?
 
no, it doesn't have to, that's a fact. However, it would still be the wisest option, in spite of the protestations of a few control freaks who can't handle the idea of people disagreeing with them.


If the material is such that would get legal attention focused on them (like the underage sex things), most writers to this site are quite happy that they draw the lines--as is their privilege as owners of the site.

You going to carry that chip on your shoulder very much longer?
 
Can someone please direct Propeller Boy to all the FREE SPEECH memes that can be found on this website?


You can see the relevance if you wish--I don't. Their support for free speech doesn't mean you have any rights here they don't grant you. As it is, they seem to put up with a lot more of your nonsense than most other Web sites you've victimized with your "going postal" style have, I'm sure.

Your sig line image pretty much defines you.
 
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