geronimo_appleby
always on the move
- Joined
- Nov 25, 2004
- Posts
- 90,768
i seem to be taking a backwards step with the stuff i submit to lit. i feel i've omproved over the last couple of years, but the feedback, PC's etc don't reflect my perception. i take a lot more time over my submissions these days, rther than the write and submit i did in the early days.
i'd appreciate some form of critique on my latest (link below) if anyone has the time and/or inclination.
this piece is a prequel to an earlier submission. it's an incest piece featuring a mother and son; how the affair began.
thank you. GA.
Playing With Cindy -- The Beginning
i'd appreciate some form of critique on my latest (link below) if anyone has the time and/or inclination.
this piece is a prequel to an earlier submission. it's an incest piece featuring a mother and son; how the affair began.
thank you. GA.
Playing With Cindy -- The Beginning