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ivantheterrible

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she got into my mind
and she loved to twist
we clicked
and danced in flames
my words and hers joined
people watched
she made me see
how easily hearts
are broken
time and distance
and electronic dance
and then
i saw
her
eyes
she taunted
and i respond
we dance
ropes in my hands
and then she was gone
i would never know
if i could bind her
to me
i need her eyes

and i love the pain
 
I'm not completely sure what it is that I like about this, but I like it. Especially the last line. Interesting poem.
 
wicked little witch
of course i can't possess air
but i can help you dance

you fanned the flame
whispers in your ear
lips brush neck
silk scarf around wrists.

i want to make you cum
with words.
 
Silk scarf and ropes? Are you kinky, into bdsm, what? I like bdsm themes in poetry. And zombies. And dildos. Have any poetry that combines all three?
By the way, welcome to the forum.
 
Poetry featuring dildo wielding Dom Zombies? Yeah, I'd read that! :D
 
Silk scarf and ropes? Are you kinky, into bdsm, what? I like bdsm themes in poetry. And zombies. And dildos. Have any poetry that combines all three?
By the way, welcome to the forum.

You're so consistent. You've been into those three things since the day I came here. Dildos, zombies and bondage, oh my.
 
Silk scarf and ropes? Are you kinky, into bdsm, what? I like bdsm themes in poetry. And zombies. And dildos. Have any poetry that combines all three?
By the way, welcome to the forum.


um, no i don't think so. zombies, dildoes........... i'll see if my mind can twist around something like that.
 
desire of words whirl about wind and water
storm surge crashing
make a spell with me
bind i and you
dance with me
 
I can't find my zombie disco inferno sonnet. What a shame, huh? :D

Look again, please. It's just too wrong to throw out a phrase like "zombie disco inferno sonnet" and not let us read it! That is unacceptable.

In fact, if you can't find it, you should be punished by having to write another one!
 
Look again, please. It's just too wrong to throw out a phrase like "zombie disco inferno sonnet" and not let us read it! That is unacceptable.

In fact, if you can't find it, you should be punished by having to write another one!
Oh, I remember that sonnet of hers. I have to go out. Have it for us to read when I get back, Ange!!! Please!
 
Look again, please. It's just too wrong to throw out a phrase like "zombie disco inferno sonnet" and not let us read it! That is unacceptable.

In fact, if you can't find it, you should be punished by having to write another one!

It was Eve's challenge: write a sonnet with zombies in a disco inferno. And I'm pretty sure that I'm the only one who took that crazy bait. But I dunno where it is. I have a few thousand poems altogether. I have them in something called a Master Poem File (no bndsm, sorry), arranged alphabetically. And I suck at titles, so I can't just skim through them and find it. I was going to cross reference them once by form or free verse and within form by type of form, but I got bored fast.

Anyway, I'll see if I can find a few outrageous poems and put em in the Bistro. This is Ivan's thread and I'm not messing it up with disco zombies anymore than I already have. :D

Oh, I remember that sonnet of hers. I have to go out. Have it for us to read when I get back, Ange!!! Please!

I know you. You did this on purpose. Don't make me talk about the mountain poem. :)
 
sorry, sorry...

moved

I just wanted to prove ang wrong that she wasn't the only one... Icing Sugar has one in his index too.
 
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I know you. You did this on purpose. Don't make me talk about the mountain poem. :)
I accept the mountain poem. I embrace the m.th.r f.cker! How about your dust poem?
I don't even know where the mountain poem is.
 
I accept the mountain poem. I embrace the m.th.r f.cker! How about your dust poem?
I don't even know where the mountain poem is.

Sometimes I still think of you as Pru. I'm not kidding!

I stuck the dust poem here. I'm pretty sick of it.
 
I'm sorry, SB. I keep reading your sig line as "Proud Flying Love Monkey" and wondering whether I need to put screens on my windows or something.

I know I'm immune to that girlie-girlie stuff, but I do not want to be bitten on the ankle, for whatever reason. ;)



I'd say get a room but I know you've got a house. Which seems, actually, to be a pretty happy one right now. Bless you both.

That picture looks like Ninja Cats. Scary.
 
I'm sorry, SB. I keep reading your sig line as "Proud Flying Love Monkey" and wondering whether I need to put screens on my windows or something.

I know I'm immune to that girlie-girlie stuff, but I do not want to be bitten on the ankle, for whatever reason. ;)



I'd say get a room but I know you've got a house. Which seems, actually, to be a pretty happy one right now. Bless you both.

That picture looks like Ninja Cats. Scary.

First of all Tz, Flying Love Monkey's don't bite - they nibble!

Secondly, Amy clipped my wings so I'm her submissive little (and happy) pet! (Plus she is going to make us watch Nikka again - Oh, my!)

Lastly, if you should should be worried about anything, it's Champ's, Eve's and Ange's dildo wielding disco zombies - Flying Love Monkey and Amynator's are even afraid of them!
 
Silk scarf and ropes? Are you kinky, into bdsm, what? I like bdsm themes in poetry. And zombies. And dildos. Have any poetry that combines all three?
By the way, welcome to the forum.


can she feel, or is she dead?
ropes, a whip.......
dildo in hand,
will she feel, or is she dead?
come here sexy
zombie
girl.


(imagine a zob zombie-esque cadence to this)
 
for katrin:

see you
feel.
enwrap you,
feel,
smell you,
feel,
taste you,
feel.
Feel,
leather...............
 
dancin with an angel
in a pit of hell
she lifts me
by the bonds
out of flames
flying through sulpher
her eyes make me
fly
 
Do not forget as you fall;
you slide deep and true
with thoughts of more
than longing, at last finding
mercy in the quiet rush
of air against your ears
drowning out the hurt
only living brings.

Those doubts of self-expression;
praise is hard to take
when all you do finds heart's
critique harsher than that handed
to you; you heap gracious servings
of cruel dislike upon your soul
and now, you fall. Slide deep
and true when you remember.

Someone has always loved you
more than you love yourself.
 
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