Novice Writer

[tequilasunrise2]

I have written a few stories. they can be seen at www.adultbabeblog.com.

Tell me what you think. I need lots of feedback as I am still very much new to this.

Thanks!

 

[The_Fractal_King]

How do people not get this? Lit allows you to post stories all on the site.

Don't ask members to spend time critiquing something that wastes bandwidth for the admins without benefiting them or the rest of us.

 

[tickledkitty]

What Fractal means is, you need to post your stories on Lit if you want us to critique them. This forum is for LITEROTICA authors.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

I have written a few stories. they can be seen at www.adultbabeblog.com.

Tell me what you think. I need lots of feedback as I am still very much new to this.

Thanks!

The only stories that get feedback here are those posted on the site, doh. You have to give to receive and we would love to give you helpful feedback if you post your stories on lit. Heck, if they are short, we'd go for sticking them on the forum.

What fractal and TK are telling you is that we value the freedom to post our silly stories here for free and, in return, respect the rules that we don't promote other sites.

There's no prob in posting on more than one site (almost everyone here does), just submit your writing - you're already a member - and we'd love to read it.

Elle

 

[The_Fractal_King]

What TK and Elfin are saying is: Blarg! Me want smash you! Roar!

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk56/glamsz_kiszesz/smiley.gif

 

[tickledkitty]

I really like you, Fractal.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

What TK and Elfin are saying is: Blarg! Me want smash you! Roar!

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk56/glamsz_kiszesz/smiley.gif

How male macho, Fractal.

We just want to lead a light of the fairer sex to the sundrenched uplands of the lit delights where the wiser and gentler wisdom of female critique prevails.

PS: I'd like to read the stories.

 

[The_Fractal_King]

How male macho, Fractal.

We just want to lead a light of the fairer sex to the sundrenched uplands of the lit delights where the wiser and gentler wisdom of female critique prevails.

Light, when absolute, can burn that which it once revealed.

PS: I'd like to read the stories.

I assume we all would. But if we come off as humorless people that have to explain everything it might scare people away