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AsylumSeeker
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I was editing a story and I ran into a situation I was not prepared for. I understood the writer's intent and it was only a single instance so I let it go as is, and the writer's approach may very well be right, but it has been nagging me ever since. I had considered sending a PM to a more skilled editor but then I decided to let additional people share their ideas and allow an opportunity for perhaps others who may not know to have a learning experience as well.
Obviously the writer in question may likely see this thread and I hope is not offended for my having asked this question (I didn't ask). But as the saying goes, it's easier to ask for forgiveness than ask for permission.
She alternately emitted low, erotic moans and higher-pitched "Oh!"'s as her sex violently convulsed against my fingers.
I'm hoping I know how to turn text red, but maybe not. If not, what I am referring to is the use of "Oh!"'s. Is this the correct way of writing it?
Would be interested to learn.
Obviously the writer in question may likely see this thread and I hope is not offended for my having asked this question (I didn't ask). But as the saying goes, it's easier to ask for forgiveness than ask for permission.
She alternately emitted low, erotic moans and higher-pitched "Oh!"'s as her sex violently convulsed against my fingers.
I'm hoping I know how to turn text red, but maybe not. If not, what I am referring to is the use of "Oh!"'s. Is this the correct way of writing it?
Would be interested to learn.
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