Snippet: A Burning Sensation

angela146

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This is a true story, but I've toned it down to make it more... um...

OK, let's be honest. I've toned it down because I don't want to admit to some of the really lurid details.

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It was a Saturday afternoon. Hubby was out having lunch with some of our friends and I had decided to sleep in. I knew what kind of a mood he would be in when he came home, and I wanted to rub salt into it.

When the phone rang, I was ready. He said he was on his way home and there was a miserable tone in his voice. I was psyched and replied - in a perky, loving, wifely kind of tone - that I would be ready and waiting, that I had a big day planned.

And then I hung up the phone before he could complain. A few seconds later, it rang again and I ignored it.

The preparations hadn't taken very much. I was clean, fresh, and naked. The oven was preheated - I mean the actual oven in the kitchen - and there were two trays of cookies ready to bake - I mean actual chocolate-chip cookies.

I popped them into the oven and set the timer, then put on my apron and my three-inch heels, which I had ready and waiting in the kitchen next to the stove. The bowl and wooden spoon were still on the counter with some dough stuck to them.

Giddy with excitement, I sat down on one of the kitchen chairs and waited.

Bill tried calling a few more times before he arrived home, but I just let it ring.

When he arrived and I could hear him pull into the garage, the cookies were maybe two minutes from being done.

The door from the garage opened and he bellowed "ANGELA!" I silently laughed and got up from my chair to stand in front of the oven.

"Yes, darling?" came my reply, all sweet and innocent.

"I have ABSOLUTELY no desire to... do I smell cookies?" He rounded the corner and saw me, bending over to remove the trays from the oven. Other than my apron and heels, the only other "clothes" I was wearing were a pair of oven mitts.

His view was mostly of me in profile from slightly behind and to the left. I set the two trays on top of the stove and turned my head to look at him.

He put his hands on his hips and said, "What are you doing?!"

"Baking cookies!" was my obvious answer.

My darling husband fumes delightfully when he's angry - especially when he's sexually frustrated. "It's bad enough that I have to put up with our women friends trying to seduce me. Do I have to put up with you being a bitch and then getting all lovey-dovey when I get home?

I pouted and walked over to him. The high heels put a natural sway into my walk that must have been painful for him to watch. "Oh, darling," I said, "you know I wouldn't mind if you took one of them up on her offer to spread her legs for you." I put my arms around his neck and pulled myself into him, raising one leg up in the back to keep myself off-balance.

As I half-expected, he turned me sideways and gave me five good hard slaps on the bottom. I resisted, pouting and crying and complaining that I really meant it - I didn't mind if he wanted to fool around with Bethany or Tina. But that was hardly the point.

"You know I can't do that, you little whore!" The six more swats with his hand hurt even more. My yelps of pain were starting to become real and I involuntarily turned my bottom away from him.

"It's all your fault!" he roared, smacking me four more times before releasing my body. "If I wasn't married to you, Tina would probably have come home with me and been sucking me off right now!"

The smell of cookies started to get to him and he reached for one of them. Of course, he burned his finger on the chocolate chip and drew his hand back to lick the hot spot.

"They need to cool, sweetie," I reached for the bowl and handed it to him. "But you can lick the bowl and spoon! I saved them for you!"

He set the bowl down and licked the dough off of the slotted wooden spoon. Looking at it in his hand, he realized that there was a perfect solution for his frustration. "Bend over that counter, Missy!" he commanded.

I looked shocked - seeming to just have figured out that he might spank me with the wooden spoon. "NO!" I said, but he had his hand on my back to turn me sideways. Letting him turn me and bend me over, I swayed my bottom from side to side - just to rev him up a little more.

Almost immediately, I felt the first blow. It burned hotter than the oven. "OUCH!" I yelled. His swing was powered by anger at me and anger at our friends for teasing him.

I very quickly started to cry from the real pain of a beating with a slotted olive-wood spoon. It was scary and it hurt even more than I had hoped it would.

My tears and my crying seemed to feed Bill's anger-lust and made him swing even harder. I silently thanked him and counted the bruises that I would have over the next few days.

Between swats and cries, I started to tell him, "Honey! They wouldn't love you like I would!" That made him hit even harder.

It was pure Heaven and Hell, all at the same time.

After maybe thirty hard strokes, he stopped and started to take off his shirt. While he did that, I stood back up and wiped the tears away - only to produce new ones from my continued crying.

"Neither of them would let you beat them like that!" I offered. He was still unbuttoning his shirt. I took hold of his hand to stop him. "And neither of them would let you fuck her up the ass with a wooden spoon! ... Or whatever else you might want to stick in her ass!"

By that point, he was ready to resume. I scurried over to the table, pushed the silverware and place-mats onto the floor with a crash and sprawled myself over it, face down, with my bottom in the air.

"And neither of them would let you put hot chocolate chip cookies on her burning backside."

He looked at the cookies - still oven hot - and looked at me with my bottom waving at him. Then he looked at my face. I winked at him with an irrepressible grin.

Not needing any further encouragement, he took the spatula from beside the stove, picked up the tray with the oven mitt, and brought it over to me. I laid there as still as I could while he slid the first cookie off the tray and onto my bottom.

A scream erupted from my mouth. It felt as if I were being branded - which I might well have been. He laughed wickedly and slid another cookie onto the other side of my bottom.

I screamed again, this time saying "NO!"

But he kept going, putting cookies on the backs of my thighs all the way down to my knees. Crying in pain and squirming almost beyond control, I somehow managed to stay in place and leave the cookies to their cooling process.

My legs cooled them off for a while. In the meantime, he saw the tub of shortening that I had used to grease the cookie sheets. Dipping the handle of the spoon into it, and grabbing a big glob on his fingers, he came back over to me.

With the glob on his fingers, he opened my cheeks and greased me. Of course, I squirmed and tried to avoid it, but of course, he held me down. After putting a couple of fingers full of shortening in my back entrance, he took the handle end of the spoon and inserted it.

I tensed, making it hurt even more than it would have otherwise.

I really dislike anal penetration and I particularly hate being penetrated with a "toy" rather than his dick. But I let it happen.

He pushed, twisted, prodded, poked and pressured the spoon farther than it really should have been pushed. When I complained louder than usual, he eased off and left it in place inside me.

By then, the burning of the cookies had subsided but I was crying hard from all of the pain of spanking, cookies and ass-fucking. Bill took a deep breath and let it out, listening to me cry in pain. It was only the beginning.

Coming to his senses, Bill pulled out a chair and sat down. I admired his bare chest through my tear-clouded eyes. "Can you do some more, sweetie," I said. It came out more like a begging cry than I had expected but that was fine by me.

He had to take the cookies out of the way before he could resume my spanking - and chose to do it by licking them off of me. That was even more intense than having them put on my skin in the first place. Still, with the wooden spoon in my ass, it wasn't as erotic as it might have been.

With the last cookie eaten, and my bottom and thighs licked clean, he removed the spoon. It felt icky coming out and most of the shortening stayed behind. There were paper-towels handy to wipe off the spoon handle. When he finished that, he held it by the bowl-end and proceeded to spank me - or really beat me - raising me to a screaming level of cries.

Finally, he shouted at me, telling me how much he hated being teased by women whom he couldn't have. He layed into me about how my willingness to let he screw around made it even worse - since most women won't touch a married man even if his wife is OK with it.

Then, allowing his rage to really come out, he explained in detail how much he despised being manipulated into giving me what I wanted - that no matter how much he hit me with the damned spoon, it didn't make him feel any better.

Inside all of my genuine crying and screaming, I laughed. He couldn't hear it through his frustration.

Eventually, he slowed down, stopped and sat down. I savored the pain and the residual discomfort of having been bottom fucked with my punishment weapon. I cried freely, keeping my head turned toward him so he could enjoy it.

Every once in a while, he would hand-spank me for a minute or two just to keep me bawling.

When the anger finally passed and the horniness took over in its pure form, he pulled me off of the table, onto my feet and slapped my bottom repeatedly to direct me to the bedroom - crying the whole way.

The door closed. I was shoved onto the bed on my back, still in my apron. I stared at him, bare chested but still wearing his pants. He took off his belt. For a moment my heart lept, thinking that he might use it on me, but then he lowered his zipper.

That sound - and the look in his eyes - sent another burning sensation through me. It was the burning sound and sight of a prelude. Scared for my... my... I have no idea what I was scared for - I started to try to escape.

But he was too fast and too strong. He had his pants off and was on top of me before I could do anything about it.

I fought him - as hard as I could - as if he were a rapist and not my husband. In fact, I fought hard enough to make him have to slap me repeatedly to subdue me. But he knew that my frenetic resistance, my repeated shouts of "NO!" and my begging him to stop, were all signs of not just consent - but of a *demand* that he fuck me.

Which he did, with relish - no, actually with chocolate and cookie crumbs. It was a sweet ravishment, not a savory ravishment.

When he finished and collapsed onto the bed beside me, I rolled over to my tummy and looked at him. I raised my ass up off the bed and swayed it. "It's all nice and lubed up for you. It's even been partially fucked so you can get inside easier.

The thought of fucking my shortening-filled ass got him rock hard again in an instant. With whatever energy reserves he had, he climbed on-top of me and stuck it in me. This time, I didn't squirm - afraid that I might push him off too easily.

Instead, I kicked my legs - which actually feels good to him - as I screamed in pain and discomfort. But surprisingly, it didn't really hurt. It just felt icky and slippery.

As he fucked, he told me all about how he wanted to do it Tina, just like he was doing it to me, to punish her for being a tease. "Close your eyes and pretend it's her," I suggested.

"I don't have to," he said, "she looks a lot like you from this angle."

Content that he was fucking Tina in his mind and me in his body, I relaxed, stopped fighting, and just let it be. After a bit, I even arched my bottom in rhythm to his fucks.

It took a long time of in and out before he came again. That had to be one of the longest ass-fuckings I've ever had. I guess I would describe it as nauseatingly unpleasant. But he eventually came and rolled off of me again.

This time, he wrapped himself around me and hand-spanked me back to tears.

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BTW: if this sounds like one or more of my previous stories, that's probably because it's something we do on a fairly regular basis. The format changes from time to time, but the whole "coming home frustrated, finding me in the kitchen, beating the crap out of me and ass-fucking me" thing is a staple of our sex life.

I wish I could get him to do it more often, but it takes a special kind of frustration to get him that angry and that violent.

Thank you Tina!
 
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Why the hell aren't you posting these as stories angela? BDSM isn't my thing but when you start with "this is a true story..." I just don't give a damn if you made it up out of whole cloth. I read it anyway.
 
I love these stories Angela! :kiss: It takes me a great effort of will to get past the domestic setting though.

I could not play this game with my husband,
no.
fucking.
way.

Our dynamic wouldn't tolerate it. Life is already too precarious. And we have never drawn our roles so firmly -- the rules just aren't there.

If I want a spanking, my reason is because it feels good-- It's a physical preference for me, and I had to prove that there was no infantilism or punishment RP involved.

But, dammit, how much more lurid did it get? :devil:
 
Why the hell aren't you posting these as stories angela? BDSM isn't my thing but when you start with "this is a true story..." I just don't give a damn if you made it up out of whole cloth. I read it anyway.
If I post it as a story, it sits in limbo for a week or more. When it's finally published, people from the AH don't read it.

If I post it here, AHers read it and I get relatively immediate feedback. My friends here on the AH (like you for example) are the audience I most care about.

The "true story" note is to help shape the comments a little bit. The note will hopefully forestall comments along the lines of "This is too unrealistic. No real woman would allow her husband to do such a thing, much less *encourage* him."

Strangely enough, those kinds of comments are more painful to me than, "You are one very sick puppy, Angela".
 
Damnation, that was smokin' HAWT!

Thanks Angela. :kiss::rose:
 
I love these stories Angela! :kiss: It takes me a great effort of will to get past the domestic setting though.

I could not play this game with my husband,
no.
fucking.
way.

Our dynamic wouldn't tolerate it. Life is already too precarious. And we have never drawn our roles so firmly -- the rules just aren't there.
We have several unusual dynamics in our relationship, much of which are a result of my emotional peculiarities.

And, as far as rules go, yes, we have developed rules, slowly over the course of almost fifteen years.
If I want a spanking, my reason is because it feels good-- It's a physical preference for me, and I had to prove that there was no infantilism or punishment RP involved.
Yeah. I can understand that. I freely admit that the idea of being punished and/or severely dominated in my relationship is unusual.

I'm a CEO of a small company. I get more than my fill of being in-charge in my career. I also hold most of the economic power in our relationship. If anything I have too much power. I like letting go of it when I'm alone with my husband. I like being under his control.

There are a lot of powerful men out there who surrender to their wives when they get home - sometimes to the point of being infantilized. I'm a female version of that. However, I don't quite go so far as infantilization. The closest I get is school-girl fantasies.
But, dammit, how much more lurid did it get? :devil:
Well, he was a lot more expressive and detailed in talking about Tina and Bethany and how they teased him. He also rubbed in some of his fantasies about them as he was screwing me.

I also turned the knife a lot harder than I let on. I reminded him of some things about the two women that made him more frustrated.

We were pretty verbally cruel to each other, but that helps to get the intensity going.
 
Damn, do you give lessons?
Um... lessons in how to get a partner to blow his cork and beat the crap out of you?

Sure, but first we would need to cover some ground about how to keep him/her from beating *more* than the crap out of you...

Or you were thinking more along the lines of fun things to do in the kitchen when you're almost naked?
 
I'm really glad you two are so well matched. I certainly would never do that to anyone, even knowing she liked it.
 
Um... lessons in how to get a partner to blow his cork and beat the crap out of you?

Sure, but first we would need to cover some ground about how to keep him/her from beating *more* than the crap out of you...

Or you were thinking more along the lines of fun things to do in the kitchen when you're almost naked?
Make sure your curtains are good solid ones!


Establishing the rules, obviously, is of paramount importance. And I was wondering how much of his "frustration" is actually with bethany and tina. How much participation they have, knowingly or un. And, especially right this minute while I am in a long convo about male privilege and all that-- what, exactly, he feels his frustration entails. Is it real, or manufactured?

I am sure you two know exactly what you're doing though! You wanna write a how-to book? I'd be glad to help!
 
I'm really glad you two are so well matched. I certainly would never do that to anyone, even knowing she liked it.
Ah, but have you ever lived with someone who has ADD *and* is bi-polar *and* knows exactly where your "buttons" are?

I have a natural ability to get on Bill's nerves and I enhance that natural ability with lots of skill.

On top of that, I know how to motivate. I reward him handsomely for doing the things that I like.

... Imagine, if you will, a wife dropping to her knees before her husband, saying grace (in Latin) and then proceeding to give him a loving blow job, pausing frequently to say things like, "I love the way you spank me, please do it more often..."

It took the first two years of our marriage for me to get Bill to the point where he could spank me hard, enjoy doing it and feel good about himself afterward.
 
Ah, but have you ever lived with someone who has ADD *and* is bi-polar *and* knows exactly where your "buttons" are?

I have a natural ability to get on Bill's nerves and I enhance that natural ability with lots of skill.

On top of that, I know how to motivate. I reward him handsomely for doing the things that I like.

... Imagine, if you will, a wife dropping to her knees before her husband, saying grace (in Latin) and then proceeding to give him a loving blow job, pausing frequently to say things like, "I love the way you spank me, please do it more often..."

It took the first two years of our marriage for me to get Bill to the point where he could spank me hard, enjoy doing it and feel good about himself afterward.
I want to read this book!
 
angela146 said:
It took the first two years of our marriage for me to get Bill to the point where he could spank me hard, enjoy doing it and feel good about himself afterward.

See, you love it. Hot Mama doesn't, at all. Her parents got divorced because the f-i-l used to smack m-i-l around, and it wasn't sexual! Needless to say, Mama is conditioned against that kind of play, seriously conditioned.
 
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Make sure your curtains are good solid ones!
Funny you should mention that...

When we built our new house, we added soundproofing to the bedroom walls, floor, ceiling and even the door. When we do something that is going to make lots of noise, we usually go to the bedroom. However, a spanking with a wooden spoon isn't a loud as with, say, a belt.

For visual privacy, we have a hedge around the relevant portions of our back yard. And, yes, we have light blocking shades.
Establishing the rules, obviously, is of paramount importance. And I was wondering how much of his "frustration" is actually with bethany and tina. How much participation they have, knowingly or un. And, especially right this minute while I am in a long convo about male privilege and all that-- what, exactly, he feels his frustration entails. Is it real, or manufactured?
It's a kind of paradox. Most of our friends see us as a very solid couple - which is true. A lot of women feel safe flirting with Bill, because they "know" that he would never do anything.

We aren't "out" to most people about our polyamory. It's a need-to-know basis. So, while Tina and Bethany assume that Bill would never stray, the only thing that stops him is the fact that he knows they are only teasing.

As for his frustration, much of it is self-inflicted. He could tell them to stop and they probably would, but there is a fun kind of intimacy that he can enjoy with them and he would loose that if he told them that they flirt too much and should stop.

In effect, he gets to see them more unguarded than a single guy (or an unfaithful married guy) would. He gets a pretty good picture of what they are like in private. They feel comfortable telling him what kind of lingerie they like and what kind of things turn them on.

That kind of thing allows for some pretty realistic fantasies.

He's kind of like they guy in "Monty Python and the Holy Grail" who wants just a little peril. He knows what it would be like to have one of them. He also is a very good lover and would probably make it really good for them. But he also knows them well enough to know that they just wouldn't go there with him.

I've promised Bill that if another woman frustrates him, he can take it out on me. That knowledge gives him the ability to enjoy it and let *them* enjoy it. The whole time, he can remind himself that I'm at home (or sitting right next to him) willing to do whatever they tease him with. He can also punish me for their teasing.
I am sure you two know exactly what you're doing though! You wanna write a how-to book? I'd be glad to help!
I'm sorely tempted. I would have to figure out a way of remaining anonymous if it's going to be explicit (and it would have to be in order to be interesting).

In other words, no book-signing tour and no lecture circuit.

Tell me more about the male priv thing. What kind of issues are you talking about?

BTW: the poly thing goes both ways for us. I get frustrated too sometimes, but men don't usually flirt as aggressively with me as women do with Bill. When I get frustrated because I've been flirting with a guy (or gal) I know I can't have, I usually ask Bill to take care of my frustration for me.
 
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Funny you should mention that...

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As for his frustration, much of it is self-inflicted. He could tell them to stop and they probably would, but there is a fun kind of intimacy that he can enjoy with them and he would loose that if he told them that they flirt too much and should stop. ...

I've promised Bill that if another woman frustrates him, he can take it out on me. That knowledge gives him the ability to enjoy it and let *them* enjoy it. The whole time, he can remind himself that I'm at home (or sitting right next to him) willing to do whatever they tease him with. He can also punish me for their teasing.
That's an very clear explanation, thanks!
I'm sorely tempted. I would have to figure out a way of remaining anonymous if it's going to be explicit (and it would have to be in order to be interesting).

In other words, no book-signing tour and no lecture circuit.
Dammit, that's the fun part! We'd have to set up a figurehead for you. :D
Tell me more about the male priv thing. What kind of issues are you talking about?
Well, I should begin a new thread I think... So that's coming up!:)
 
Yeah, I want to know what priviledges are supposed to go with being male, myself. :rolleyes:
Every man can point out where the privilege doesn't work for them-- seeing where its so normative that you never even notice it-- that's the toughie. As I said to one guy, of course you don't accept male privilege-- you swim in it like a fish swims in water.


Angela's Bill has a role that he plays, which is a deliberate caricature of some classic male attitudes; he gets angry at women who flirt with him, and take it out on his wife. In the context of this very special marriage, this works, because he knows his role to a fine line.

But there's a reason that archetype exists for Bill and Angela to play with.
 
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Every man can point out where the privilege doesn't work for them-- seeing where its so normative that you never even notice it-- that's the toughie. As I said to one guy, of course you don't accept male privilege-- you swim in it like a fish swims in water.


Angela's Bill has a role that he plays, which is a deliberate caricature of some classic male attitudes; he gets angry at women who flirt with him, and take it out on his wife. In the context of this very special marriage, this works, because he knows his role to a fine line.

But there's a reason that archetype exists for Bill and Angela to play with.

Unquestionably a very special marriage and, as Angela said, she had to spend two years training him in his role.

What I'm far more familiar with is male responsibility. This probably comes from being the older brother of two sisters. Taking care of girls is simply what I do. It was expected of me all the time I was growing up and once I got married, I just continued the process. It makes my little girls in class absolutely dote on me, I suspect, and the younger ones come running up and hug me.

However, I have no doubt that you are correct. If I were to take time to carefully examine any given day I would know that there are many times that I can get away with things others, especially women, would never dare . . . simply because in this society the big, white male is the authority figure. Add to that a loud baritone voice and, yes, instant male priviledge. The ethical connundrum, then, is never to abuse it. Another toughie. ;)
 
Unquestionably a very special marriage and, as Angela said, she had to spend two years training him in his role.

What I'm far more familiar with is male responsibility. This probably comes from being the older brother of two sisters. Taking care of girls is simply what I do. It was expected of me all the time I was growing up and once I got married, I just continued the process. It makes my little girls in class absolutely dote on me, I suspect, and the younger ones come running up and hug me.

However, I have no doubt that you are correct. If I were to take time to carefully examine any given day I would know that there are many times that I can get away with things others, especially women, would never dare . . . simply because in this society the big, white male is the authority figure. Add to that a loud baritone voice and, yes, instant male priviledge. The ethical connundrum, then, is never to abuse it. Another toughie. ;)
"taking care of girls. "

yep.

Girls must be taken care of. Because they are not capable of taking care of themselves, or of being taught how to take care of themselves.... No one expected you to help your sisters learn to take care of themselves.

And in many ways, it's impossible-- because our world is not set up so that women can take care of themselves. Without super-extra training, like black belt judo for the physical protection issues, and maybe stage training for shouting down loud men.

And double-tutoring because a woman still needs to be twice as good as a man to be "as good"

"If I were to take time to carefully examine any given day ..."

Yep.

Who takes the time? The world is simply ticking along as it should. :)
 
"taking care of girls. "

yep.

Girls must be taken care of. Because they are not capable of taking care of themselves, or of being taught how to take care of themselves.... No one expected you to help your sisters learn to take care of themselves.

And in many ways, it's impossible-- because our world is not set up so that women can take care of themselves. Without super-extra training, like black belt judo for the physical protection issues, and maybe stage training for shouting down loud men.

And double-tutoring because a woman still needs to be twice as good as a man to be "as good"

"If I were to take time to carefully examine any given day ..."

Yep.

Who takes the time? The world is simply ticking along as it should. :)

And yet, strangely enough, when the time comes to look after ailing and elderly parents it's usually the daughters who end up doing the taking care of...

It seems to be hardwired into my brain to care for other people, I can;t help myself. Sometimes my feministic instincts come out and kick me on the shins for conforming so utterly to so many feminine stereotypes, but equally they would bash me on the head if I tried to be something I'm not just to make a point. True feminism is about being able to choose the path that fits you best.

And with this totally unrelated non sequitur of a post...

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"taking care of girls. "

yep.

Girls must be taken care of. Because they are not capable of taking care of themselves, or of being taught how to take care of themselves.... No one expected you to help your sisters learn to take care of themselves.

And in many ways, it's impossible-- because our world is not set up so that women can take care of themselves. Without super-extra training, like black belt judo for the physical protection issues, and maybe stage training for shouting down loud men.

And double-tutoring because a woman still needs to be twice as good as a man to be "as good"

"If I were to take time to carefully examine any given day ..."

Yep.

Who takes the time? The world is simply ticking along as it should. :)

Or at least as it does.

And yet, when a group of young women about to graduate from a Ivy League University were asked whether they wanted to be independent career women or taken care of, the answer was "Yes, both. Sorry . . . " So in spite of whatever we may profess to believe, we still find comfort in traditional roles and want to adhere to them no matter how much we protest. I suppose so long as we are both aware of what we're doing we can manage, somehow.
 
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