American Pie... need some writing help, guys

[evanslily]

Okay, after much deliberation, I've decided that it's about time I tackled writing a sex scene from the male POV, or at least part of the scene anyway. This is new for me and I'd like to get it right.

I've seen posts recently discussing whether the woman can really 'feel his hot seed' inside of her (well, I never have, more's the pity). But I don't think I've seen a thread discussing what the man gets to feel (apologies if there is, and if someone can point me to it, even better ).

So my question is this--guys, what does it feel like to be inside a woman? I've seen it written as 'hot, tight sheath', 'snug, velvet channel', etc., etc.. Can you feel the heat? If so, how hot are we talking, LOL? Is it the least bit like sliding into warm apple pie? (though as obviously, I haven't got a penis, even that's not a particularly helpful analogy).

Anyone willing to offer a description?

 

[cloudy]

I've seen it written as 'hot, tight sheaf', 'snug, velvet channel', etc., etc..

If you've seen it called a "sheaf," then whoever wrote it doesn't have much of a vocabulary.

sheaf:

1: a quantity of the stalks and ears of a cereal grass or sometimes other plant material bound together

2: something resembling a sheaf of grain <a sheaf of papers>

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I believe the word you're looking for is sheath:

1: a case for a blade (as of a knife)

2: an investing cover or case of a plant or animal body or body part: as a: the tubular fold of skin into which the penis of many mammals is retracted

3: any of various covering or supporting structures that are applied like or resemble in appearance or function the sheath of a blade:

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

One of my partners described ejaculation in her as being bathed in fire and ice simultaneously.

Every vagina is different. One girl I dated felt like her vagina was a hand gripping me; she could adjust the muscle pressure very finely. A few are so loose its like fucking water.

The best vaginas, in my opinion, feel like peanut butter.

 

[evanslily]

If you've seen it called a "sheaf," then whoever wrote it doesn't have much of a vocabulary.

sheaf:

1: a quantity of the stalks and ears of a cereal grass or sometimes other plant material bound together

2: something resembling a sheaf of grain <a sheaf of papers>

*******

I believe the word you're looking for is sheath:

1: a case for a blade (as of a knife)

2: an investing cover or case of a plant or animal body or body part: as a: the tubular fold of skin into which the penis of many mammals is retracted

3: any of various covering or supporting structures that are applied like or resemble in appearance or function the sheath of a blade:

Oh, doh. My mistake. Thank you for pointing that one out.

 

[TxRad]

Okay, after much deliberation, I've decided that it's about time I tackled writing a sex scene from the male POV, or at least part of the scene anyway. This is new for me and I'd like to get it right.

I've seen posts recently discussing whether the woman can really 'feel his hot seed' inside of her (well, I never have, more's the pity). But I don't think I've seen a thread discussing what the man gets to feel (apologies if there is, and if someone can point me to it, even better ).

So my question is this--guys, what does it feel like to be inside a woman? I've seen it written as 'hot, tight sheath', 'snug, velvet channel', etc., etc.. Can you feel the heat? If so, how hot are we talking, LOL? Is it the least bit like sliding into warm apple pie? (though as obviously, I haven't got a penis, even that's not a particularly helpful analogy).

Anyone willing to offer a description?

Ok, let me take a stab at this. (No pun intended)

The penis is sensitive to say the least. Especially the head and flanged area under it. When erect and the skin is pulled tight, it gets even more sensitive. Hold your hand out flat and spread your fingers tightly. Run you fingertip and nail lightly over the palm in a circular motion. That tingly itching feel is close to the same feeling.

As for feeling the heat, it al depends on the woman and how turned on she is. The penis and vagina are basically the same temp, whatever the norm for humans is. But then again some people are warmer or cooler than others. Blood flow increases with arousal so the temp goes up.

Sit in a cool tub of water and slip two fingers into your vagina. You can definitely feel the heat on your fingers. And over emphasis but you'll get the idea of the difference in air temp and internal body temp.

As was already pointed out, different women will be tighter or looser depending on internal makeup, age, and how much they exercise the area strengthening the muscles surrounding the vagina. Some feel like you are slipping into warm or hot oatmeal and they cling to the whole length of your shaft. Others, you only feel the opening and where the head brushes the inner walls.

I could go on but then I'd have to post this in the how to section.

Hope it helped.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I think S-Dez told me this one; While you are in the shower, lather up your hands. Stick two fingers of one hand into the fist of the other, and move them in and out-- that will give you an idea of what it's like.

When I tried it, the novelty kept me in the shower for an extra ten minutes!

 

[TxRad]

I think S-Dez told me this one; While you are in the shower, lather up your hands. Stick two fingers of one hand into the fist of the other, and move them in and out-- that will give you an idea of what it's like.

When I tried it, the novelty kept me in the shower for an extra ten minutes!

Are you sure it was your fist the two fingers were in?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Are you sure it was your fist the two fingers were in?

Well, sure-- at first anyways! I did discover that fingers simply do not ejaculate, though. I kinda thought not, but now I know.

 

[TxRad]

Well, sure-- at first anyways! I did discover that fingers simply do not ejaculate, though. I kinda thought not, but now I know.

"Sorry Captain, I didn't know that pistol was loaded."

 

[Stella_Omega]

Ok, let me take a stab at this. (No pun intended)

The penis is sensitive to say the least. Especially the head and flanged area under it. When erect and the skin is pulled tight, it gets even more sensitive. Hold your hand out flat and spread your fingers tightly. Run you fingertip and nail lightly over the palm in a circular motion. That tingly itching feel is close to the same feeling....

And if I lick my palm?

...Others, you only feel the opening and where the head brushes the inner walls.

My guess is that she's filled herself up with air in this case, and I know when that happens all of my own feeling --inside of me-- is muted. You might try sticking a finger in alongside to break suction and maybe rolling over so she's sitting over you-- let her blow a nice long pussyfart. What say you?

 

[evanslily]

My guess is that she's filled herself up with air in this case, and I know when that happens all of my own feeling --inside of me-- is muted. You might try sticking a finger in alongside to break suction and maybe rolling over so she's sitting over you-- let her blow a nice long pussyfart. What say you?

LOL. Well, what can I say? Thank you, all of you, for the descriptions thus far. Very useful. I'm going to have hours of fun with this, I can see. I think I'll try the sitting in a cool tub first then follow it up by with sliding my fingers into my fist during a hot shower...

But more descriptions are very welcome...

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Is it hot? It's as hot as you'd want it to be. It's as soft as you'd hoped it would be - impossibly soft. More than that, it's chokingly intimate, like having her soul wrapped around you. There's the feeling of being an irresistibly hard and masculine object triumphing over an exquisitely yielding and feminine one that opens and embraces you with a wild and eager, feverish joy. There's the feeling of plunging into impossible beauty and pleasure over and over again, of shoving your cock into heaven with your lover's face.

How she actually feels in detail - it can depend on position, on time of month, on how hard and excited you both are, on the phase of the moon, on all sorts of things. She can be slick as silk or almost grainy and rough. She can be tight and resistant or loose and surrendered. Maybe she's strong and moves against you and milks it out of you or maybe she lies there in a near swoon and makes you pound it into her, but it's always good becuase what you feel down there is only 25% of the pleasure. The rest is in your mind and in the back of your legs and in your shoulders and your ass and your ears and your eyes and teeth.

When I write porn, I change their sensations to reflect the mood. If they're all excited and passionate, I have their sensations be intense too. If they're making tender love, then they'll feel more gossamer and gentle to each other. You can probably say anything as far as physical sensation goes as long as you get the emotions right. You can say she felt like a crumpled up bath towel inside as long as you get how he felt as he fucked her and people will buy it, because sex is really an emotional thing, and the things people feel and do in sex are all expressions of their inner emotions.

 

[neonlyte]

I don't think many men would admit to it, but it can also be painful

 

[Oblimo]

I don't think many men would admit to it, but it can also be painful

And scratchy! Sometimes, the initial penetration can itch like crazy. Lubrication, self- or otherwise, is everybody's friend.

 

[damppanties]

Is it hot? It's as hot as you'd want it to be. It's as soft as you'd hoped it would be - impossibly soft. More than that, it's chokingly intimate, like having her soul wrapped around you. There's the feeling of being an irresistibly hard and masculine object triumphing over an exquisitely yielding and feminine one that opens and embraces you with a wild and eager, feverish joy. There's the feeling of plunging into impossible beauty and pleasure over and over again, of shoving your cock into heaven with your lover's face.

How she actually feels in detail - it can depend on position, on time of month, on how hard and excited you both are, on the phase of the moon, on all sorts of things. She can be slick as silk or almost grainy and rough. She can be tight and resistant or loose and surrendered. Maybe she's strong and moves against you and milks it out of you or maybe she lies there in a near swoon and makes you pound it into her, but it's always good becuase what you feel down there is only 25% of the pleasure. The rest is in your mind and in the back of your legs and in your shoulders and your ass and your ears and your eyes and teeth.

When I write porn, I change their sensations to reflect the mood. If they're all excited and passionate, I have their sensations be intense too. If they're making tender love, then they'll feel more gossamer and gentle to each other. You can probably say anything as far as physical sensation goes as long as you get the emotions right. You can say she felt like a crumpled up bath towel inside as long as you get how he felt as he fucked her and people will buy it, because sex is really an emotional thing, and the things people feel and do in sex are all expressions of their inner emotions.

I'm just here to say that this post made me feel all gossamer-ish inside.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I'm just here to say that this post made me feel all gossamer-ish inside.

Yeah. I don't mean to be clever or evasive, but the way to think about this issue is to think about how you would describe to a man what he feels like inside you. I'll bet you'd only spend like 25% of the time talking about the physical sensation and that would be pretty vague. You'd talk about a feeling of fullness and satisfaction, a kind of pain that's not really pain. Most of what you'd say would be about the feeling of intimacy and rightness and the joy of having him there inside you, emotional things or diffused kinds of feelings. Men are surprised to learn that women can't tell how far we reach inside them or that they can't feel our come. They feel our passion and our love, not our mechanics.

 

[3113]

Damn. I forgot to do the soapy-fingers-in-fist as a showered this morning! Will it work at the kitchen sink?

 

[jomar]

Damn. I forgot to do the soapy-fingers-in-fist as a showered this morning! Will it work at the kitchen sink?

I tried it. Turns out it wasn't as good or as fun as the real thing.

 

[Gizzmotick]

I don't think many men would admit to it, but it can also be painful

Depending on position, yes. I find that it is the feeling of her whole body against me that makes the love-making complete. From the way her sit-bones dig into me when she is on top, to the way her whole body feels when I am behind her.

Dr. Mabeuse had it quite right. Love-making is quite the emotional act. Another thing to keep in mind is that most men are extremely visually oriented. Personally, I love it when I can look down and see myself penetrating her, or envision where my cum will land when I ejaculate onto her.

Work a few thoughts like that into your story, and you'll do fine.

 

[3113]

Nero had it quite right. Love-making is quite the emotional act.

So, you're just trying to get close to us? That's soooo sweet! I had no idea that was the intent behind all those guys hitting on me, wanting me to spend the night at their place and all...

And to think, I wasted all that time on dates and conversations in hopes of connecting emotionally

 

[Gizzmotick]

So, you're just trying to get close to us? That's soooo sweet! I had no idea that was the intent behind all those guys hitting on me, wanting me to spend the night at their place and all...

And to think, I wasted all that time on dates and conversations in hopes of connecting emotionally

But of course... It's the physical closeness that most guys enjoy. Is this really anything new?

 

[TheeGoatPig]

So, you're just trying to get close to us? That's soooo sweet! I had no idea that was the intent behind all those guys hitting on me, wanting me to spend the night at their place and all...

And to think, I wasted all that time on dates and conversations in hopes of connecting emotionally

Emotions? What are those?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Emotions? What are those?

Those things you use emoticons for;

 

[NoJo]

I think S-Dez told me this one; While you are in the shower, lather up your hands. Stick two fingers of one hand into the fist of the other, and move them in and out-- that will give you an idea of what it's like.

Yes, and if you then flap your arms you'll get a pretty good idea of what flying feels like

 

[Stella_Omega]

Yes, and if you then flap your arms you'll get a pretty good idea of what flying feels like

You mean-- that doesn't work either?