Colton_White
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I submitted it, but they rejected the story with some auto reply- saying it had spelling and grammar mistakes, I checked it but found none, may be cause English isn't my first language that's why.
Would some one care to edit & correct it for me, please?
if you have feedback to give post it in this Thread
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'A Fake dom/master remembers'
Some 3 years ago, I was surfing on a free porno site. They had a BDSM section, first I thought it was some porn movie company, upon clicking on its link, seeing the videos and
pics I figured out it had something to do with the black leather uniform, handcuffs and spanking.
So, curiously I searched more of it, and landed on a site called TSR [The Slave Register.]
And on my surprise it was literally filled with countless lady profiles seeking 'wanting to be sub/slave of the master'
I felt like being a kid in the candy shop. What else could I do? immediately created a free profile. Added my body description, Y! id, and penis photos.
They accepted other things but rejected 'explicit images of erect penis' ..damn, if you're so concerned about the rules then why the hell you allow photos of women showing boobies
in their profiles? Well to keep the male population entertained. otherwise no one would join ha..ha. ha..
Anyways as further I ventured in the dark woods I came to know more about 'myself'
that I was mentally a Dom, in the sense I’d like to be dominant in the relationship, calling the shots, taking care of her,etc. but
I figured out that anything dealing with blood/urine/scat/rape/animal-play/ locking her into cage/etc. etc. etc. pervert stuffs were a big turn off for me.
I came to know that I respected ladies, and it made me uncomfortable to call them bitch/slut/cunt/hooker etc. or humiliate them, even when asked by them to do so.
So they started labeling me as a 'soft fake vanilla dom'
hmm... well If these ladies are so obsessed with 'hard sadistic masters' then why don't they migrate to some African / Middle east country? serve in the harem of some old man there, and produce lot kids for him.
and in return they should send the oppressed women from those countries back to the first world, so the 'balance of country wise population and ration of female to male' remains status quo.
I also came to know that ...
#BDSM ladies have a thing for mature/experience/older master but I'm too boy scout to lie and cheat about my age/xp.
#BDSM has various sub-divisions like vampires,goth,hun,vandal,vikings,warewolves,aliens etc. and everyone have their separate terminologies like gorigan kajira and stuff like that.
#There are a lot ladies 'willing to relocate' to your place, but most of them are from eastern Europe or Asia trying to migrate to USA/UK/Canada/Australia via 'marriage route' or regular hookers or drug addict/criminals needing someone to give them shelter and pay for their lawyer's fees, debts & bail-bonds.
#There are lot 'fake couples' = older jerks getting themselves photographed with professional hookers in BDSM costumes and then putting a profile [of the fake girl claiming to be his slave] and then seeking to add '3rd woman in their relationship' and bragging about being an 'experienced master'
#There are lot 'lazy old man' who get more pleasure in insulting and labeling the online newbie as 'Fake' rather then enjoying fucking with their so called 24/7 [imaginary] harem of at least 4 sexy girls in 18-21 age bracket at home.
#most people talk in third person philosophical stuff that was hard for common people to understand.
#90% of lady profiles have written in it ‘still learning’, but rarely any male profile there says ‘I’m still learning/ willing to learn’ – reason – ladies don’t give chances to an inexperienced guy, and males think like “what the heck is there to learn? I’m horny lets fuck”
#Most master are selfish, they 'claim' to have 4-12 slaves In their harem [both online and off line], but still they and their ladies are further looking to add more ladies in it. I mean Jesus, if you already have your plate full of sweet food, then leave something for others cause there already is a big shortage of women.
# On every BDSM board, the senior members are very very welcoming and courteous to the newbie. But only if the newbie is lady, otherwise if its a male [esp. wanna be master/dom], then everyone [esp. the so called experienced masters] start taking him as a threat & compititior, and start labeling him as fake. same way the so called mistress and dom-ladies also start nagging him, cause those ladies want to remain in the cartel - the aristocrat online BDSM society, so they've to play according to the tunes of the leaders of the cartel, if they don't agree with other 'experienced' male doms, its taken as 'indiscipline', ha ha ha.
#in short there is no place for newbie dom with self-esteem to remain in BDSM lifestype, unless you compromise your self-esteem for a while, keep flicking your tail on their tunes to get yourself in the cartel, which was impossible for me. so I left.
despite of my lot honest efforts
no lady give me a chance cause I didn't have any experience, and further deprived me of gaining any experience. So in the end, I figured out its a big cycle, I came back to where I had started -
the same lonely life, all I gained is some wisdom and few bdsm terminology words.
Finally I left the BDSM life for a better, easier, more peaceful, comfortable life called 'wanking over the porno stash in your computer!'.
Would some one care to edit & correct it for me, please?
if you have feedback to give post it in this Thread
======================
'A Fake dom/master remembers'
Some 3 years ago, I was surfing on a free porno site. They had a BDSM section, first I thought it was some porn movie company, upon clicking on its link, seeing the videos and
pics I figured out it had something to do with the black leather uniform, handcuffs and spanking.
So, curiously I searched more of it, and landed on a site called TSR [The Slave Register.]
And on my surprise it was literally filled with countless lady profiles seeking 'wanting to be sub/slave of the master'
I felt like being a kid in the candy shop. What else could I do? immediately created a free profile. Added my body description, Y! id, and penis photos.
They accepted other things but rejected 'explicit images of erect penis' ..damn, if you're so concerned about the rules then why the hell you allow photos of women showing boobies
in their profiles? Well to keep the male population entertained. otherwise no one would join ha..ha. ha..
Anyways as further I ventured in the dark woods I came to know more about 'myself'
that I was mentally a Dom, in the sense I’d like to be dominant in the relationship, calling the shots, taking care of her,etc. but
I figured out that anything dealing with blood/urine/scat/rape/animal-play/ locking her into cage/etc. etc. etc. pervert stuffs were a big turn off for me.
I came to know that I respected ladies, and it made me uncomfortable to call them bitch/slut/cunt/hooker etc. or humiliate them, even when asked by them to do so.
So they started labeling me as a 'soft fake vanilla dom'
hmm... well If these ladies are so obsessed with 'hard sadistic masters' then why don't they migrate to some African / Middle east country? serve in the harem of some old man there, and produce lot kids for him.
and in return they should send the oppressed women from those countries back to the first world, so the 'balance of country wise population and ration of female to male' remains status quo.
I also came to know that ...
#BDSM ladies have a thing for mature/experience/older master but I'm too boy scout to lie and cheat about my age/xp.
#BDSM has various sub-divisions like vampires,goth,hun,vandal,vikings,warewolves,aliens etc. and everyone have their separate terminologies like gorigan kajira and stuff like that.
#There are a lot ladies 'willing to relocate' to your place, but most of them are from eastern Europe or Asia trying to migrate to USA/UK/Canada/Australia via 'marriage route' or regular hookers or drug addict/criminals needing someone to give them shelter and pay for their lawyer's fees, debts & bail-bonds.
#There are lot 'fake couples' = older jerks getting themselves photographed with professional hookers in BDSM costumes and then putting a profile [of the fake girl claiming to be his slave] and then seeking to add '3rd woman in their relationship' and bragging about being an 'experienced master'
#There are lot 'lazy old man' who get more pleasure in insulting and labeling the online newbie as 'Fake' rather then enjoying fucking with their so called 24/7 [imaginary] harem of at least 4 sexy girls in 18-21 age bracket at home.
#most people talk in third person philosophical stuff that was hard for common people to understand.
#90% of lady profiles have written in it ‘still learning’, but rarely any male profile there says ‘I’m still learning/ willing to learn’ – reason – ladies don’t give chances to an inexperienced guy, and males think like “what the heck is there to learn? I’m horny lets fuck”
#Most master are selfish, they 'claim' to have 4-12 slaves In their harem [both online and off line], but still they and their ladies are further looking to add more ladies in it. I mean Jesus, if you already have your plate full of sweet food, then leave something for others cause there already is a big shortage of women.
# On every BDSM board, the senior members are very very welcoming and courteous to the newbie. But only if the newbie is lady, otherwise if its a male [esp. wanna be master/dom], then everyone [esp. the so called experienced masters] start taking him as a threat & compititior, and start labeling him as fake. same way the so called mistress and dom-ladies also start nagging him, cause those ladies want to remain in the cartel - the aristocrat online BDSM society, so they've to play according to the tunes of the leaders of the cartel, if they don't agree with other 'experienced' male doms, its taken as 'indiscipline', ha ha ha.
#in short there is no place for newbie dom with self-esteem to remain in BDSM lifestype, unless you compromise your self-esteem for a while, keep flicking your tail on their tunes to get yourself in the cartel, which was impossible for me. so I left.
despite of my lot honest efforts
no lady give me a chance cause I didn't have any experience, and further deprived me of gaining any experience. So in the end, I figured out its a big cycle, I came back to where I had started -
the same lonely life, all I gained is some wisdom and few bdsm terminology words.
Finally I left the BDSM life for a better, easier, more peaceful, comfortable life called 'wanking over the porno stash in your computer!'.
