Oral intensity

coolcan

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You know if I got a hold of that sexy body of yours, I would own it, at least for a while...I would love to show you my pussy licking and ass eating skills, you would certainly enjoy, as much as I would doing it...Just to taste your cum and try to hold you still while you are having that nice orgasm, pushing my fingers deeper into that cum soaked pussy and hot ass, you cant' help it and your getting close...Trying to hold it off, because it feels so good, I can feel your buddy start to shudder and the mini's are starting...Your moans are getting closer and your hips starting to thrust, you start to cum as I am looking deep into your eyes, with that blue twinkle of mine...You throw your head back and give into your feelings…I just lick harder, circling your clit with my tongue, around and around faster and faster, while rubbing your G-Spot, and another finger working that tight sensitive ass...I feel your anus clench my finger as you start to explode, I can taste your cum and it is getting thicker, trying to push me away because the sensitivity is overwhelming, but I will not stop not until you are finished and cannot possibly take anymore, not missing a drop of your sweet sticky cum....After catching your breath, you pull me up to give me a nice long passionate kiss for a job well done, I feel your nails massaging my scalp, as you lick and nibble all over my lips tasting every drop of that sweet pussy of yours... You then force me over onto my back with that naughty grin on your face, I just know what's cumming next, and I can’t wait...You can't wait to show me what a passionate cocksucker you can be when you hit that level of sexual frenzy...

You start kissing my neck and licking my ears whispering in my ear how bad you want to taste my cum...You work your way downward kissing and licking all over my chest while touching and stroking my already throbbing cock....You slowly start licking and sucking my balls while stroking my cock, spitting on your hand a bit, so it's nice and wet...You start looking up at me with that intense look in your eyes, and I know all you want is to be rewarded with my cum for a job well done, your such a good slut when you get worked up...Now your licking up and down my swollen shaft teasing me a bit, while massaging my balls and asking if I like the way you suck my cock, you know I like it you dirty slut, just fucking do it...Taking me in your mouth about half way, and working my cock good, I can hear you moaning in pleasure, which drives me crazy... Then with no warning you start trying to work it all the way down, moaning and groaning shoving my cock further and further down your throat. I can feel you with your hands on my hips pulling me harder and harder making me fuck your face...Your such a filthy cum slut, trying to make me give up my load before I really want to, just so you can feel my cock explode in that pretty mouth of yours...

Looking down at you watching how intensely you are trying to devour my cock like a woman who has not sucked a cock in months, craving the taste of my sticky load...You looking up at me with those puppy dog eyes showing me how much you are my little slut…I see a couple of tears and your eye liner running a bit, because you are practically gagging yourself to show me your loyalty, but they are tears of joy, because you would not have it any other way...I have to reach down and grab your face while looking deep into your eyes to pry you off of my throbbing cock...You start licking up and down the shaft, spitting a bit stroking my cock, while rubbing my balls with the other, you certainly know how to work me well...You push my legs open a bit so you can really suck and lick on my balls while stroking my cock, fuck this feels great, you are such a cock loving slut, and that's what I love about you...I feel your tongue working towards my tight, sensitive, asshole as I start to squirm a bit, then I feel your tongue dancing in circles around my asshole, getting it all nice and wet, your such a filthy bitch....Then I feel your tongue pushing into my ass, while you start stroking my cock harder and faster, oh shit...Sensing my moans and movements you know I am on the edge, you mave back to my cock and start sucking it for all that you are worth, while rubbing my balls and my wet asshole with your skillful fingers. As I feel you take every bit of me in your mouth and start really working it, pausing for a few second when it's all the way down your throat, looking up at me with those eyes the whole time...Oh fuck I can't take it anymore, uh uh fuck uh uh, not breaking your eye contact you slurp up every fucking drop, oh fuck, oh fuck, that was great baby, give me a kiss you dirty slut...



Now I am ready to give you a nice long fucking, you won't get the second nut that easy bitch....

I so Love writing this good stuff.
 
"Good" is not a word I would use in describing what you've written. Perhaps you've posted it in the wrong Thread/Forum?
 
The ellipsis "..." is used to convey an incomplete thought, or dialog.

"Bernice, where did you put my...?" Abner stared out the window in horror as a garbage truck dropped a dumpster on top of his spanking new BMW.
 
Damn you guys are critical of a guy just having some fun, I am not trng to steal your jobs...I don't think someone reading and getting horny is worried of all the particulars..
 
Damn you guys are critical of a guy just having some fun, I am not trng to steal your jobs...I don't think someone reading and getting horny is worried of all the particulars..

If you noticed, this is the Story Feedback Forum, generally we give feedback on what is written. You may have more success in the Story Ideas Forum.
 
Damn you guys are critical of a guy just having some fun, I am not trng to steal your jobs...I don't think someone reading and getting horny is worried of all the particulars..

They totally are. Grammar Nazis need to get off too.

Besides this a feedback forum. Why would you post here if you weren't looking for criticism?
 
Besides this a feedback forum. Why would you post here if you weren't looking for criticism?

Well, as far as that goes, does anyone really post here for criticism? Doesn't everyone actually post here for praise?
 
Well, as far as that goes, does anyone really post here for criticism? Doesn't everyone actually post here for praise?

Oh, I think there have been a few here that have been genuinely interested in criticism. They may be few and far between however.

I did post some stuff in the SDC, and honest criticism was what I was after.
 
Actually, if Hallmark had a porn line, some of this stuff could be whittled and shaped into some effective prose-poetry.


Oh, and the only proper place for a Nazi (grammar or otherwise) is some kind of camp. Or just shoot it.
 
Well, as far as that goes, does anyone really post here for criticism? Doesn't everyone actually post here for praise?

I'm sure we all have ulterior motives but a few seconds of looking at threads would show that people tend to get more criticism than praise.
 
Well, as far as that goes, does anyone really post here for criticism? Doesn't everyone actually post here for praise?

SR, when praise is earned we give it. But when the text gives us a headache we say so.

This snippiet is just so... How can I even comment? :confused:
 
To both of the above, my comment was on what people came looking for, not either what they get here or what they deserve to get. Was I being unclear?
 
Well, as far as that goes, does anyone really post here for criticism? Doesn't everyone actually post here for praise?

Well, not everyone, SR.

I've got (shameless plug) a thread just below this one where I'm asking for feedback on what I did wrong on the epilogue of a story, such that--while nearly matching most other chapters in reads--it's gathered only about 20% of the votes that each previous chapter received.

So, yeah, I already know I screwed up somehow (other than the epilogue posting on Christmas Day!) and I'd like to know why readers don't care enough about this chapter to vote.
 
Well, not everyone, SR.

I've got (shameless plug) a thread just below this one where I'm asking for feedback on what I did wrong on the epilogue of a story, such that--while nearly matching most other chapters in reads--it's gathered only about 20% of the votes that each previous chapter received.

So, yeah, I already know I screwed up somehow (other than the epilogue posting on Christmas Day!) and I'd like to know why readers don't care enough about this chapter to vote.

But it was a good ploy to renew interest in a buried story, right? ;)

Much more inventive than the usual "I can't find" postings.
 
But it was a good ploy to renew interest in a buried story, right? ;)

Much more inventive than the usual "I can't find" postings.

Well, I thought it was a good ploy, if intended to be fairly transparent--hence the "shameless plug" addition--but it was also intended to be a cogent response to your post.

I don't think I've failed at either.
 
Well, I thought it was a good ploy, if intended to be fairly transparent--hence the "shameless plug" addition--but it was also intended to be a cogent response to your post.

I don't think I've failed at either.

I'm all for clever marketing. The "can you help me find" ones are lame and make me think they think I'm stupid.
 
I'm all for clever marketing. The "can you help me find" ones are lame and make me think they think I'm stupid.

Thanks! That is my line of work, roughly, although I somehow don't think my company will be branching out into pimping amateur erotica.

Still... :D
 
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