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BedtimeStories77

BedtimeStories77

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Hi there. Though i'm working on a story of real life events (and real dreams/fantasies of the person involved) i need ideas on how to "spice up" a shower masturbatory scene. :eek:

It's a small problem i have... i usually find trying to recap my own stories as boring. *shrugs* It feels like some sporting event play-by-play sometimes, and i fear that is happening now!
 
If it's a masturbatory shower scene, why not throw in the fantasies that are fueling the pleasuring in the first place?
 
i did. In real life, hopping in the shower happened before going off to meet a co-worker outside of work...was thinking of him, and getting dirty while getting clean. lol ;)


i think i've almost pulled myself through that scene in the story so i can move on now, though.
 
BedtimeStories77 said:
i did. In real life, hopping in the shower happened before going off to meet a co-worker outside of work...was thinking of him, and getting dirty while getting clean. lol ;)


i think i've almost pulled myself through that scene in the story so i can move on now, though.
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Well, there you go. Just write those fantasies in very explicit, dirty detail. Just try not to get too distracted with them, or you'll never finish. ;)
 
Now the way I would play out the scene is you start to do yourself, closing your eyes and as it builds up you bang your body against the side wall making two circular holes through the wall. Also you could be moaning/screaming out in pleasure so much that the mirror cracks, the lights explode, nearly windows explode, an airplane flying overhead looses control and some aliens planning to invade earth somewhere in outerspace cover their ears and decide to split.

Naturally after you calm down following your orgasm you act like nothing happened.
 
You can always add something that you plan to later remove: like a voyeur. That is, you could write the scene as if it is being watched by your little brother, or your horny roommate, or your pervy neighbor, or whatever, through binoculars. That should shift your perspective and let you make it really hot.

After it's written, you can either leave in the voyeur, or take him out and just make it an omniscient narrator.

Good luck!......Carney (hey hey, 1000 posts!)
 
Carnevil9 said:
You can always add something that you plan to later remove: like a voyeur. That is, you could write the scene as if it is being watched by your little brother, or your horny roommate, or your pervy neighbor, or whatever, through binoculars. That should shift your perspective and let you make it really hot.

After it's written, you can either leave in the voyeur, or take him out and just make it an omniscient narrator.

Good luck!......Carney (hey hey, 1000 posts!)
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Continuing with Carney's idea, how about if the voyeur is masturbating as well and some voyeur is looking at that voyeur. Oh fuck it - make the whole world masturbate!

Congrats on hitting 1000 posts. If the censor police never showed up I would've tied you by now.
 
BedtimeStories77 said:
Hey hey, 10,000+! :p lol



And, thanks for the ideas guys. i did get myself past that point last night!
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So, what do I get for my 1000 posts? I know that at 100 I got to put up an avatar; do I have any special new powers now that I should know about? Like the ability to make red traffic lights turn to green by staring at them? The power to melt ice cream with my mind? The mojo to walk down a street and turn into a bar? Inquiring minds want to know!......Carney the Magnificent
 
Little late, but it seems that if you're gonna have a scene with you masturbating in the shower, you should have your character up against the wall of the shower stall, slowly sliding down to the floor as she gets too lost in the pleasure to stay standing. :D
 
Real life shower masturbation or even bathtub masturabtion just doesn't work for me. I'm not sure why... I just can't get into it, no matter how much I fantasize. It's nice to read a story with it in there though. I hope the story has flowed nicely for you.
 
I love the story

RedHairedandFriendly said:
Real life shower masturbation or even bathtub masturabtion just doesn't work for me. I'm not sure why... I just can't get into it, no matter how much I fantasize. It's nice to read a story with it in there though. I hope the story has flowed nicely for you.
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It has got me hot and horny
 
Texguy84 said:
Little late, but it seems that if you're gonna have a scene with you masturbating in the shower, you should have your character up against the wall of the shower stall, slowly sliding down to the floor as she gets too lost in the pleasure to stay standing. :D
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Good idea for a future story (unless i go backtrack about two pages and add that in now!). ;)



RedHairedandFriendly said:
Real life shower masturbation or even bathtub masturabtion just doesn't work for me. I'm not sure why... I just can't get into it, no matter how much I fantasize. It's nice to read a story with it in there though. I hope the story has flowed nicely for you.
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Well, quite honestly, i didn't do a lot. i don't masturbate often, and don't care for SELF vaginal penetration. But the story is mixing real life acts with a co-worker and my real fantasies of him. ;)
 
BedtimeStories77 said:
Well, quite honestly, i didn't do a lot. i don't masturbate often, and don't care for SELF vaginal penetration. But the story is mixing real life acts with a co-worker and my real fantasies of him. ;)
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So you understand I wasn't knocking your story? :rose:

I personally don't care for self vaginal penetration either. I'm more a clit stimulation girl when it comes to doing it myself. I love the bullet vibes, so much so I need to replace the two I had that are broken... that's three down in a year. :eek: :eek:
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
So you understand I wasn't knocking your story? :rose:
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Oh, i never felt you were at all! :)



RedHairedandFriendly said:
I personally don't care for self vaginal penetration either. I'm more a clit stimulation girl when it comes to doing it myself. I love the bullet vibes, so much so I need to replace the two I had that are broken... that's three down in a year. :eek: :eek:
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That's me, but my vibrations are stronger. i've converted a recharageable electric shaver. :eek:
 
I don't know if this will help with any ideas but...a few months ago I had a girl over and she loved being watched. I watched her take a shower. But she was acting too sexy...kinda like an old fashioned stripper from the 30's or something. I told her no, just shower like you normally would if no one was watching you. Now that was a turn on. To be able to see what a woman does in the morning shower, when NO ONE from the outside world is supposed to see. She was shy about washing her behind I could tell. But I told her, you forgot a place :) And just to see her get truly embarrassed when I handed her the wash cloth was to die for. She stood there with it in her hand for a while, just rubbing it around her shoulders and such. Then she mustered the courage to use it all up and down her bottom. It was quite sexy. I encouraged her to really wash up her pussy too, as she just sort of skimmed around it the first go around, again, out of embarrassment.
 
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