Confusing and erratic

[mBrow]

Why has madam_noe disabled feedback on Durand's Story Pt. 02 ?

Durand's Story Pt. 01 was engaging and erotic, but Pt. 02, though grandiose, was erratic and full of grammatical errors and typos. It seemed quite rushed and I had much difficulty following the plot. Some serious proofreading and editing was greatly needed.

However, I have much enjoyed some other works by madam_noe, so I hope that this last rush was an anomaly from which Ms Noe would recover in the future!

 

[Hocky9377]

Why has madam_noe disabled feedback on Durand's Story Pt. 02 ?

Durand's Story Pt. 01 was engaging and erotic, but Pt. 02, though grandiose, was erratic and full of grammatical errors and typos. It seemed quite rushed and I had much difficulty following the plot. Some serious proofreading and editing was greatly needed.

However, I have much enjoyed some other works by madam_noe, so I hope that this last rush was an anomaly from which Ms Noe would recover in the future!

Maybe thats why she disabled feedback. She probably felt the same way about it after it was posted and decided she didnt want to hear everyone else tell her the same thing she already knew. You dont want other people telling you your story is crap when you feel the same way. Does not boost the confidence.