A Few Story Ideas

strangenickle

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Anyone think any of these ideas are any good, or appealing to anyone? Two of them I already wrote and they are awaiting approval.

1. Cinderella, where most of the focus is Cinderella is getting revenge on her stepsisters for tormenting her (and basically keeping her as a semi-BDSM slave against her will.) The revenge would lead to the sexual humiliation of Cinderella's stepsisters through public spanking, shaming and very rough sex.

2. A rich couple goes through a divorce, both of them are completely rich and successful, but also greedy sociopaths. The wife has committed numerous counts of adultery, and is on video doing drugs, this public display has humiliated her husband, and destroyed his public image. In the divorce settlements she risks losing custody of her children, and any chance at receiving alimony. The Husband offers her an incredibly good settlement despite his lawyers advice, as long as she gets on the divorce settlement table, and has extremely rough, and humiliating sex with her husband right in front of all the lawyers. Many years later after the husband looses his entire business and has to file for bankruptcy, the ex-wife offers him a deal(she has made good investments, and have become very wealthy) She fucks him up the ass with a strap on, and she gives him 5,000,000 dollars. The ex-husband agrees, but there is a hidden camera, and the ex-wife sends the tape to all of his business rivals, leaving the ex-husband rich again but completely defeated.

3. A fairly simple idea, where a woman who treats her boyfriend like absolute shit, and cheats on him with her boss just to get a promotion(but is eventually fired when her boss's wife finds out about it.) After she dumps her boyfriend for no good reason after years of his devotion despite her bitchy abusive, and adulterous attitude, she sees on television that he won a huge lottery. She begs for his forgiveness, and the boyfriend makes her an ultimatum. His house has been covered with high tech cameras, and she is to have sex with him in any way he wants her to, for the next week. After that she can make a choice, she takes half of his fortune and leaves, but has the videos of her distributed over the internet, the boyfriend receiving the profits, or she decides to the boyfriend destroys the tapes, and they make a try at being married in a relationship built around equality. The girlfriend is subjected to spankings, lesbian sex/domination, and generally absolute servitude to her boyfriend. In the end she decides to leave, the boyfriend gives her the money, and publishes his hours of tapes. In the end however the boyfriend remains obsessed with his ex, and lives a life of solitude, and depravity addicted to his own pornography. The ex-girlfriend ends up staring in more pornography, and makes a good deal worth of money. The boyfriend is distraught after he sees the object of his obsession in other pornography movies, with other men.

4. A vigilante group creates a televised pornography show, called "To catch a prostitute." Where men proposition random women with money for sex, and if the women agree they are secretly filmed having sex for money then confronted by a host, called names and told their seemingly private sex act would be shown on television. The leader of this vigilante organization is a middle aged woman who is a moral crusader to rid the country of prostitution. When her show proves to be extremely successful the moral crusader starts to get desperate for money and ratings, she targets high profile upper class women. Eventually a prominent investigators sister is humiliated in one of these sadistic moral crusades. He uses all of his skill to dig up dirt on the founder of the vigilante organization. He finds that she is a dominatrix, and is generally sexually depraved. He finds she has a daughter who is a college student, that publicly supports everything her mother does calling the women who are the subject of the shows, worthless pieces of trash. However the professor finds out that she is engaging in sexual activity with her professors to raise her grades. The investigator hires two underlings to proposition her for sex, when she agrees and engages in raunchy sex with two men. After the sex the investigator comes out and confronts the daughter, asking her personal questions and calling her names. When the investigator shows the leader of the vigilante group the tape, threatening to release it to the internet, unless the leader of the vigilante group dissolves her group, and is dominated herself. After being dominated the leader of the vigilante group stops airing her own program, and is left defeated.

Here is another one that isn't so fleshed out.

5. A ghost can't leave the human world until she humiliates, some bullies at her college that led her to suicide, she is granted powers to go into anyone livings body and take control.

Would these stories be appealing at all?
 
They are apealing to me. Some more than others, but I'd certainly give them a read and see how they turned out.

About the fourth one. I think it would be interesting if the investigator managed to get the show to do a piece on their boss's daughter, them not knowing who she is, and the boss lady only seeing it when it air on tv.
 
The first idea would fit in with a chain story I'm involved with, started by Selena_Kitt. If no one's taken the Cinderella story, you might want to give Selena a PM. ;)

Of all the ideas, the one that really jumps out is the fourth one. While I see a serious tone of betrayal and revenge in all of your ideas, it comes across as the most creative theme in this idea.

The show would have to be on pay cable, such as Showtime or HBO (or an invented parallel; perhaps "Showbox."). Or perhaps even Internet-based. But a cable network would reach a larger audience.

The idea does have promise.
 
Yeah that I think would be a great ending to that storyline, for the fourth story where the daughter gets exposed.
 
I have already written numbers 1 and number 2. Cinderella themed stories have already been done, but they either are too harsh for my tastes, and involve death, or they are about sex between the prince the Cinderella. I wrote mine focusing on sort of dark humor, and essentially the stepsisters getting much more than they even deserved by a very sinister Cinderella. I also think the 4th story has the most promise, but it really will be daunting to write, as I would want the characters to be more than 2 demensional(Unlike the other stories that have a little more outlandish themes.) Essentially I am happy with the other ideas being simply pornography written somewhat hastily for my own enjoyment, and the enjoyment of others, except the 4th idea I would like that story to stand on merrits beyond just the sex, and revenge themes.
 
Are you going to submit your stories strangenickle?

My stories too tend to deal with humiliation. I have three in the submitting process, you may want to give them a look when they finally get put up.
 
Yes Lalah I have submitted both of those stories. I cannot wait to read your stories when they get posted.
 
Please post here or pm me when your stories are up. :)
 
Pretty good storylines!

I'm usually not into ghost type stories, but I'm having many ideas coming to mind for number 5. I think that'd be an interesting story.
 
Thank you, I think I am going to write the Ghost story next, with a few adjustments! One of my stories is posted now. The other I edited, and will probably be posted soon.
 
Anyone think any of these ideas are any good, or appealing to anyone? Two of them I already wrote and they are awaiting approval.

1. Cinderella, where most of the focus is Cinderella is getting revenge on her stepsisters for tormenting her (and basically keeping her as a semi-BDSM slave against her will.) The revenge would lead to the sexual humiliation of Cinderella's stepsisters through public spanking, shaming and very rough sex.

5. A ghost can't leave the human world until she humiliates, some bullies at her college that led her to suicide, she is granted powers to go into anyone livings body and take control.

Would these stories be appealing at all?
1 is taken, but you can still do it as Cinderella-like, and not an actual sequel with the same characters.

5 would be real good if it had a good subplot.
There is a TV show called Ghost Hunters.
A group of paranormologists (my own word) try to disprove stories of hauntings and other paranormal activity.
You can add something along those lines.
 
Thank you Fantasies_Only. My story about Cinderella is now up on Literotica. If there is another story like it I would love to be directed to it. Also I believe that the ghost story will be the next one I write, and I am going to concentrate on making the non-erotic parts of that story more appealing. I also realized many errors in my writing on the Cinderella story, and I might be requesting editing for my Ghost story. Again the Cinderella story was only my second attempt at writing anything remotely resembling erotic literature, and it was extremely difficult for me to write, I hope to get better as I continue to write.
 
Thank you Fantasies_Only. My story about Cinderella is now up on Literotica. If there is another story like it I would love to be directed to it. Also I believe that the ghost story will be the next one I write, and I am going to concentrate on making the non-erotic parts of that story more appealing. I also realized many errors in my writing on the Cinderella story, and I might be requesting editing for my Ghost story. Again the Cinderella story was only my second attempt at writing anything remotely resembling erotic literature, and it was extremely difficult for me to write, I hope to get better as I continue to write.
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The story was originally written in German (I think).
Her name is Ella, and she cleans or tends to the hearth, getter all dirty with soot and cinders, so everyone calls her Cinder-Ella or Cinderella.

I was speaking of professional porn (most likely Jenna Jameson).
For non erotic versions, look no further than Mother Goose On The Loose (TV series narrated by Angela Lansbury after Mother Goose movies by Shelly Duvall of Popeye).
 
I now have 3 stories up strangenickle, if you're still interestied in reading them. Link is in my signature. Can I have a link to your lit profile?
 
I liked your stories a lot Lalah, I hope that eventually the tables are turned on Mandy, and she is sexually humiliated.

Also in regards to the Fantasies_Only's remark about the Cinderella story. I completely understand that erotic Cinderellas have been done many times over, however with my story the focus is not really on Cinderella but her revenge on her step-sisters. The main storyline is not a down on her luck girl becoming a princess, it is about a down on her luck girl seeking revenge against those who made her down on her luck. In my story Cinderella isn't even really a likable character, more of a vindictive sadist than anything else.
 
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I liked your stories a lot Lalah, I hope that eventually the tables are turned on Mandy, and she is sexually humiliated.

Also in regards to the Fantasies_Only's remark about the Cinderella story. I completely understand that erotic Cinderellas have been done many times over, however with my story the focus is not really on Cinderella but her revenge on her step-sisters. The main storyline is not a down on her luck girl becoming a princess, it is about a down on her luck girl seeking revenge against those who made her down on her luck. In my story Cinderella isn't even really a likable character, more of a vindictive sadist than anything else.
Sounds like a dominatrix to me, which is probably why it's in BDSM.
 
But having to go to the trouble of looking up the author's profiles myself, I'm way too lazy for that...

But that said, I've read his story already. :p
 
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Another one of my stories has been posted. It is the one about the divorce. It was actually the first story I wrote. It is short and has less overall erotic content than my other story. On the first day of its posting it got more views than my Cinderella Story, and got overwhelmingly bad ratings. It seems people either thought it was mediocre or hated it with every bone in their body. I also have the ghost story coming, that it is my most complex, and longest story, I also think it is better written than my other stories. It is WAY weirder than my other stories on focuses on some obscure fetishes., so it will be interesting to see what people think.
 
The one I'm most looking forward to is the 4th one, with the twist I suggested. Although obscure fetishes can be fun too...
 
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