Editor help please

[SasyLittleGirl]

I have two stories ... one a Daddy Daughter type thing which I can edit to be Master/slave tho it will loose some of the fun ... And another I have had edited ALREADY by two different volunteers and it is rejected thrid time for yet a different reason. Both need editing one for the first time via help here and one for the third attempt to get it posted... Any one interested ... the one that keeps getting rejected is really one I really like as did my friends and I honestly think it is good Any one interested in helping before i say .... it ?


Found three to help me ... thank you for reading

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I'll Do It

I'll Take Them On If Not Too Long (5k words or so each) PM me, copy to the PM, and give me an email addresss to return them to in your PM

I have two stories ... one a Daddy Daughter type thing which I can edit to be Master/slave tho it will loose some of the fun ... And another I have had edited ALREADY by two different volunteers and it is rejected thrid time for yet a different reason. Both need editing one for the first time via help here and one for the third attempt to get it posted... Any one interested ... the one that keeps getting rejected is really one I really like as did my friends and I honestly think it is good Any one interested in helping before i say .... it ?