secret_liyah
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- Dec 9, 2007
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I need an editor, not a killer of words and thoughts, but an open critic willing to critique and add to the flow of my writing. Of course, I am willing to remove unneeded passages and the likes, but what I am really looking for is someone to help evolve my writing; per say, suggest parts where I could add description, help me to develop my two main characters, and round out the transitions from a few scenes. I am feeling as though my main two characters, particularly the leading, are a bit off focus. It seems as though my two characters are being view through a foggy window, and I want to add life and character to them...so that they can be more than one-dimensional.
The story is completed and is about 21 pages using 12font time.
The story I am requesting help on is an interracial (black woman white male), but the focus is mostly a difference in politics, and so the difference in race is only referred to once or twice.
Cheers!
The story is completed and is about 21 pages using 12font time.
The story I am requesting help on is an interracial (black woman white male), but the focus is mostly a difference in politics, and so the difference in race is only referred to once or twice.
Cheers!
