Need A Female Perspective

[lpmsa]

I am new to this and have enjoyed very much my first foray into writing. BUT, I recently tried something different, that is, writing a couple of stories from 'a female voice,' (that is as though I was a woman in that story.)

What I would be interested in, isn't so much an editor, but an unbiased female to read sample(s) of my true stories written in the male voice and sample(s) of the fiction written in the female voice and give me an idea of the effectiveness of trying that, of the accuracy in portraying the female voice, and related feedback.

The easiest to locate male voice items include 'Broke Oak' in the title and all of the female voice items include 'The Meadows' in the title.

So, if someone could be so kind ... Thank you in advance, Gus

 

[fieryjen]

I am new to this and have enjoyed very much my first foray into writing. BUT, I recently tried something different, that is, writing a couple of stories from 'a female voice,' (that is as though I was a woman in that story.)

What I would be interested in, isn't so much an editor, but an unbiased female to read sample(s) of my true stories written in the male voice and sample(s) of the fiction written in the female voice and give me an idea of the effectiveness of trying that, of the accuracy in portraying the female voice, and related feedback.

The easiest to locate male voice items include 'Broke Oak' in the title and all of the female voice items include 'The Meadows' in the title.

So, if someone could be so kind ... Thank you in advance, Gus

Linking to your stories would probably be a good idea. People are lazy

 

[SesameStreet]

Yes, please link to your stories in your Signature. The Search is not working at present.

 

[lpmsa]

Live and Learn! Thanks for the hint

I am new to this and have enjoyed very much my first foray into writing. BUT, I recently tried something different, that is, writing a couple of stories from 'a female voice,' (that is as though I was a woman in that story.)

What I would be interested in, isn't so much an editor, but an unbiased female to read sample(s) of my true stories written in the male voice and sample(s) of the fiction written in the female voice and give me an idea of the effectiveness of trying that, of the accuracy in portraying the female voice, and related feedback.

The easiest to locate male voice items include 'Broke Oak' in the title and all of the female voice items include 'The Meadows' in the title.

So, if someone could be so kind ... Thank you in advance, Gus

I had no idea how to do this or that it could be done, but I will give it a try. Thanks for the hint. I don't know why they don't show up in blue like links ought to, but maybe they will when I submit...

BrokeOak 00 - The Beginning (male voice)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=339360

BrokeOak 01 - Joins the Coffee Circuit (male voice)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=340340

BrokeOak 02 - Smoothies Continue (male voice)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=340422

The Meadows - Catching up (female voice)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=344070

The Meadows - Lake House 1 (female voice)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=344921

The Meadows - lake 2 (pending, not published yet) (female voice)

 

[cantdog]

A female co-writer can be a great thing. Especially in smut.