Looking for an editor

[anoche]

I'm looking for an editor to review spelling, grammar and overall flow for a 28,500 word story. Comments and/or suggestions are always greatly appreciated as well. I'm thinking this will probably wind up in the fetish category as that's where the last one wound up. The story involves hetero sex, cunnilingus, analingus, creampies and at least on the surface, non-consent. The story revolves around a male and a female co-worker and the games within the game of love. It is a sequel to "Cream Filled" which I posted last year.

While the word count may seem off putting, the paragraphs are generally only two or three sentences long and there is a significant amount of dialog. I'm not in a rush, so getting it back in a week or so is fine. I can send the document in its current.rtf format or as a .doc or .txt file.

Send me a message if you are interested.

Thanks in advance for any assistance.

anoche

 

[CopyCarver]

*SPAM*

deleting spam = good

forcing spam artists to eat 10 cans of the noxious biomass per offense = cosmic justice

 

[emap]

Hey Spam is GOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I grew up having it for breakfast mixed in with hashbrowns some eggs over easy and a glass of OJ.

Hmmm, perhaps not, I did grow up to be a barslut.

 

[ms.read]

emap I have to disagree. This is the editors forum and She's LOOKING FOR AN EDITOR? Spam, yeah thats for breakfast!

 

[emap]

I was talking to Copy, he said we should make spammers eat 10 cans of the noxious biomass.

Spam is pretty good mixed in with many things, rather good with mac and cheese. Not to mention it works well in salads, with an oil dressing of course.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Hey Spam is GOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I grew up having it for breakfast mixed in with hashbrowns some eggs over easy and a glass of OJ.

Hmmm, perhaps not, I did grow up to be a barslut.

emap I have to disagree. This is the editors forum and She's LOOKING FOR AN EDITOR? Spam, yeah thats for breakfast!

I was talking to Copy, he said we should make spammers eat 10 cans of the noxious biomass.

Spam is pretty good mixed in with many things, rather good with mac and cheese. Not to mention it works well in salads, with an oil dressing of course.

People, people, please. If you read carefully the 'Spam' title was on a post from a spammer that I edited and that was deleted. The user handle was 'nixiguoguo'. It had nothing to do with Anoche.

Don't threadjack his/her request for an editor, please.