My first story

[MelbnRacer]

Hello

Aussie hopeful writer here has just finished my first story.

Its actually being written for a special someone, but I hope to publish it here once she has read it.

Its quite a slow burn, erotic couplings story.

Please PM me if you would like to help with editing, or some suggestions.

Thanks!

MelbnRacer

 

[newgirl4u]

Hello

Aussie hopeful writer here has just finished my first story.

Its actually being written for a special someone, but I hope to publish it here once she has read it.

Its quite a slow burn, erotic couplings story.

Please PM me if you would like to help with editing, or some suggestions.

Thanks!

MelbnRacer

Love the story MelbnRacer. Have any more?

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... Its quite a slow burn, erotic couplings story.

Please PM me if you would like to help with editing, or some suggestions. ...

You might get a better response if you specify the help you feel you need (e.g. grammar only, grammar and continuity, etc.), and its length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Okay, I'll bite, hoping the hook isn't sharp, lol.

Already committed to a gig but if you're willing to wait, or beat the other to my plate, I'll start.

I'll PM you.