NaughteeDragon
Hiring Maidens
- Joined
- Jul 25, 2022
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The Devil's Mistresses does a great job of this. One of the few stories I've ever read where succubi are actually scary, and they are fucking terrifying. They are doing this whole mother daughter thing as they suck the guy's soul out through his dick. It is twisted. One of the only erotic horror stories I've ever liked. That story creeps me out just thinking about it.If the death/violence isn't sexualised - if you don't write it to arouse the reader - it seems to be OK. I have a story where the POV character stabs a man as he's masturbating over her. I have space vampires suck the souls out of people during sex - and another character then have sex with the soulless bodies while the vampire seduces another character.