SilverFox29485
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I'm a long-time reader but a first-time author. My story is about a mid-50s couple that seduces a 23-year old naive (female) college student and teaches her all about sex. It's a long-form story, the kind I like, and I already have almost 6 chapters written. But to tell the truth, I've read it so many times that I no longer know if it any good. Here are two paragraphs from the opening chapter. If this interests you, I can send you the full document in Word or Google. I can be contacted at my e-mail here (SilverFox29485@yahoo.com) or at JCPT1987@yahoo.com. (And, yes, I'm old enough to still have Yahoo mail.)
***Story starts here***
[Mark has asked Diana to go shopping for some exhibitionist things as an excuse to seduce the sales girl.]
"When you shop, go to a store that has personalized service so you can get a girl to help you. And make sure you ask her to come to the dressing room to look at the bras and panties while you try them on. Ask her opinion. Ask her if she thinks your nipples are too visible. Make sure you call her attention to your nipples. Be sure she looks at them. Ask her other questions, too. Things like, ‘Do my boobs look good in this bra?’. Ask questions that keep calling attention to your boobs and nipples. Do the same for the panties. Get her to look at them ‘cause she’ll see your pussy, too. Got it?”
“God, this is exciting already.”
“Now let’s talk about that sales girl. Pick a young one. Not too young. A college student working over the summer living in D.C. would be perfect. She need not be the prettiest girl working the floor that day, nor the one with the best body. You want to find one that is normal looking and normal shaped. And while we know her job as a sales girl will make her be overly friendly, try to pick one that you sense is on the reserved side. Look at how she is dressed. Someone flashy is not what we want. Let’s break-in a new one this time. Agreed?”
***Story starts here***
[Mark has asked Diana to go shopping for some exhibitionist things as an excuse to seduce the sales girl.]
"When you shop, go to a store that has personalized service so you can get a girl to help you. And make sure you ask her to come to the dressing room to look at the bras and panties while you try them on. Ask her opinion. Ask her if she thinks your nipples are too visible. Make sure you call her attention to your nipples. Be sure she looks at them. Ask her other questions, too. Things like, ‘Do my boobs look good in this bra?’. Ask questions that keep calling attention to your boobs and nipples. Do the same for the panties. Get her to look at them ‘cause she’ll see your pussy, too. Got it?”
“God, this is exciting already.”
“Now let’s talk about that sales girl. Pick a young one. Not too young. A college student working over the summer living in D.C. would be perfect. She need not be the prettiest girl working the floor that day, nor the one with the best body. You want to find one that is normal looking and normal shaped. And while we know her job as a sales girl will make her be overly friendly, try to pick one that you sense is on the reserved side. Look at how she is dressed. Someone flashy is not what we want. Let’s break-in a new one this time. Agreed?”
