A real couple, loving, simple story. First person.

Afi701

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i’ve never written stories before, how would this kind of story work to develop and build on? Does it turn you on? Is it too boring for everyone? It would be fun to write about something genuine, loving and real, and make something simple feel sensual and hot. Never written before, thoughts on this welcome.

Here’s my idea that I can develop, but will keep it for myself if people don’t like it/don’t think it’s good!

It’s from my own experience of a past relationship that I could make remembering it part of the story
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My girlfriend sleeps on her front at night usually, she will either just sleep in some pyjama bottoms, shorts or if it’s too hot her underwear. I like to slowly wake her up in the night by massaging her legs and ass until I feel her stir a bit. I can feel her still be sleepy but getting turned on. I’ll kiss her on the neck and not say anything.

I love feeling her body. She’ll spread her legs a bit, I love it most when she’s lying belly down as I’ll put my hand between her legs from behind, and I can feel how wet her pussy is.

With her belly down, I’ll start to touch her clit how she likes it, gently and slowly to begin with, and the palm of my hand will be between her ass cheeks, massaging her and feeling her grind her ass into me wanting me, wanting me to keep playing with her. She always starts a bit timid with that, but I know it turns her on having her ass played with a little, but for some reason we never talk about it.

Sometimes she’ll lift her hips up a bit wanting more, sometimes she’ll turn over and lazily kiss me, sometimes she’ll talk and start begging me to do it faster, sometimes I’ll feel her hand come down and join mine and she plays with her pussy. Watching her play with herself really turns me on, sometimes I’ll get my dick out and she’ll pull me in to her mouth while I watch her finger herself. Usually she just wants my hands over her though

It always ends in this crazily intense body shaking orgasm for her, more than any other sex somehow. I’ll be holding her tight and that’s the point we look each other in the eyes, and I tell her I love her. Sometimes she’ll squirt and those are really intense.

I move up the bed and put my dick in her mouth, sometimes I do that while still fingering her pussy before she orgasms. She sucks me lazily and deep. She sucks me until I cum, she swallows, and then we fall asleep in each other’s arms.
 
This is not a story. This is a scene in a story.
What else ya got?
Ah yeah. This is true. I kinda just wanted to test this out as it is way more vanilla, without fetishes etc than the stuff I read on here. And if it works I would build from here.

I’ll prepare something around this to show how I’m imagining it as part of a story and share it with you.

Thanks
 
Don't worry about vanilla or fetishes/kinks in your story if it doesn't fit what you're writing. It's your story. Don't worry about the readers or their expections. Stories find their audiences. Two people in missionary position can be plenty hot if it's written well.
 
Don't worry about vanilla or fetishes/kinks in your story if it doesn't fit what you're writing. It's your story. Don't worry about the readers or their expections. Stories find their audiences. Two people in missionary position can be plenty hot if it's written well.
That makes sense, I’ll just go for it and see how it hits. I love the idea of people having reaction to it. So the worst reaction I was worried about was “meh”

Can I ask an annoying question? What feels like a good length for a short story on here?
 
I'd be fine writing and publishing it as a "scene" and if you later want to add it to an entire "story" you can add to it.
 
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