Just the once

[sanchezshp]

I love the idea of a reluctant wife slowly being seduced and encouraged by husband. Eventually her fantasies match his etc etc. However she still doesn't want to go all in. So the story ends up with her allowing a well endowed guy just putting his cock in once so she can find out how it feels, he does that missionary. Even on going in once she feels she could cum. Next she feels how it is just the once doggy, then her riding..where she cums

 

[sirhugs]

then she discovers that once is never enough

 

[Rob_Royale]

This is pretty much a garden variety hotwife story. There are probably thousands of them on this site. That's not a bad thing, tropes are popular for a reason, but as writers, our job is to make our version stand out somehow. What will you add to this story to make it stand out? What's the spin that you would put on it?

Do the husband and wife live in a fantasy world where there are other races and the husband is keen to see her with an elf, a creature so beautiful that sex becomes euphoric on a completely new level? Or perhaps an orc, a massive muscular creature that will handle her like she weighs nothing?

 

[sirhugs]

This is pretty much a garden variety hotwife story. There are probably thousands of them on this site. That's not a bad thing, tropes are popular for a reason, but as writers, our job is to make our version stand out somehow. What will you add to this story to make it stand out? What's the spin that you would put on it?

Do the husband and wife live in a fantasy world where there are other races and the husband is keen to see her with an elf, a creature so beautiful that sex becomes euphoric on a completely new level? Or perhaps an orc, a massive muscular creature that will handle her like she weighs nothing?

don't forget the centaur

 

[Carnevil9]

This sounds a lot like soaking.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

If her husband wanted her to indulge in fantasies, would the fantasies be that she becomes a hotwife? (Yawns) Or that she is more open to a wider variety of sex acts.

 

[DanDraper]

This sounds a lot like soaking.

A concept I never understood. Once its in, you might as well keep going.

 

[DanDraper]

This is pretty much a garden variety hotwife story. There are probably thousands of them on this site. That's not a bad thing, tropes are popular for a reason, but as writers, our job is to make our version stand out somehow. What will you add to this story to make it stand out? What's the spin that you would put on it?

Do the husband and wife live in a fantasy world where there are other races and the husband is keen to see her with an elf, a creature so beautiful that sex becomes euphoric on a completely new level? Or perhaps an orc, a massive muscular creature that will handle her like she weighs nothing?

I have to agree, not an original concept, that's a good chunk of the LW stories. Not entirely a bad thing, some of the common story tropes are fun to read if it's written well enough. If you do go with this story, try to make it somewhat original so it could stand out more if you want more people to read it.

 

[Britva415]

A concept I never understood. Once its in, you might as well keep going.

The concept is better than going to Hell, and possibly also better than not going in at all.

That's the story, anyway. In real life, you know they don't just soak and they do keep going.

Saying you're only soaking is plausible deniability.

 

[sanchezshp]

OK the background is that a husband and wife are staying at a hotel. There is a big Penis club thing going at one of the conference halls. In order to join you get your dick measured. They are missing one judge and the wife reluctantly says she will do it. There are three judges and they measure each guy, length girth and also aesthetics. Needs to be over 8 inches to join. They have a break every half hour. She finds it because the judges need to relieve themselves. So the OP is about meeting one of the guys later with her husband etc

 

[KindredFlame]

I am sorry to say I agree with everything others have said in this thread. I don’t see a hook to make the idea stand out from the crowd. I wish you the very best, good luck with your project.

 

[sirhugs]

don't forget the centaur

...or the tentacle monster