Instant Turn Off Words or Phrases

As someone who has written a couple of stories and working on more, this thread is frustrating to read. There are so many landmines for someone like me to dodge around here that it becomes daunting to write.

One thing to note from a couple of posters here, when writing a story, redundancy can be a killer. Not only for some readers but for the writer themselves. So we may use more that one or two words when talking about a cock or a pussy. I contstantly refer to a thesaurus in an effort to keep repeating the same words.

That being said, 'penis' is my personal deal breaker. It makes me think of a boy, too young to be in one of our stories. So my fall back is "dick" or "cock" depending on the character or where I am in the story. But I also use, rod, staff, hardness to avoid writing the words dick or cock 1000 times in a story.

Vagina isn't as bad. I may use it early in a story, but its usually pussy after that. I don't agree with those who have a problem with the word cunt, but I don't use it since its such a deal breaker for American women.

Breasts, boobs, tits... depending on the action. The hotter it is, the more likely I use tits.

I've used slut and pet. I don't recall using the words whore or bitch though.

I do try to stay with words that are respectful and more likely that adults would use.

Just my nickel. (since pennies are no longer valid currency here in the states) :whistle:
 
I am currently working on a Daddy/little girl (she's an unrelated adult) story. I was inspired after reading some threads in the Fetish section.

While you may not appreciate them, some people are very passionate about that lifestyle.
 
"I want to choke you with my dick."
"I want to tear up your pussy."
"I want to fuck you until you can't walk anymore."

Any sex act that would require a visit to the ER is not worth it and an immediate turn off for me. If what you have in mind for me has me seriously injured afterwards, I'll just masturbate. It's far easier, safer and I always cum with a smile. :D
 
I dislike penis and vagina. Too cold, clinical and lifeless.

"Oh Reginald. I suppose you could place your penis in my vagina. It is the third of the month when we have intercourse."

For most of my life I disliked slut, whore and bitch, mainly for political reasons. I'm very comfortable with them now.

I'm Australian so if I haven't said cunt three times before breakfast I'm probably not feeling well. It's fine to be a cunt here, a funny cunt or a lucky cunt, just not a fucking cunt. That is offensive.
Sorry Great and mighty Oz, contentious but the C word is not fine, in any context for me as an Aussie. Your a funny bugger, he’s a bit of a prick, or he’s a lucky bastard, just no need to slip the C in anywhere. I do respect your Op though, just disagree with the stereotyping
 
For my part, it's a personal choice. What pple put in stories or the mouths of their characters is another thing entirely. It has nothing to do with stories. I, personally would not want a woman I am with calling me daddy. It's a real life thing. Does that help?

Sure. It's not my thing either, though I do find the interplay of the relationship interesting.
 
My edited answer after misreading thread.
A woman who is foulmouthed in public. Certain words.
The bedroom is different.
 
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They were "killed in a car crash/ plane crash" For fucks sake.... I stop reading every story that has those words..... which is a surprising lot of them .

But, thankfully, it's usually in the first paragraph.... so I don't waste a lot of time as a result. I have been waiting for one that has the people dying in a car crash because a plane crashed into it.
 
No ..... seriously..... I'm not looking for any Pulitzer award winning stuff here but for fucks sake.

I have a two strike rule for my regular reading. I will continue to read if there is something the author writes that is a bit off.... I give them a free pass once unless it is totally egregious . I stop reading if there are two. And some of it is goofy... I know but picking homegrown strawberries and canning homegrown tomatoes in the same day in the lower part of the Midwest isn't going to happen. That was a one strike .....
 
I have many:
lice
scabies
ringworm (my nickname in grade school)
pinkeye
syphilis (my nickname in college)
leprosy (my nickname in parochial school)
crabbyMcFlabby (my last girlfriend's nickname)
 
Man....now that I fucking think about it:
Hungarian goulash
There's a genocide in my britches
Jock strap
Jock strap goulash
Should there be scabs on my sphinctor?
I spelled sphinctor wrong...twice.
 
Dooo....(that's my new gender free version of dude [if you don't like it eat my muthafucking farts! Doo. Yo doo...you just ate my farts...and apparently any farts my mutha made by fucking.]) Suck it.
 
Dooo....(that's my new gender free version of dude [if you don't like it eat my muthafucking farts! Doo. Yo doo...you just ate my farts...and apparently any farts my mutha made by fucking.]) Suck it.
Dooo is the snowmachine in winter.....
 
"I want to choke you with my dick."
"I want to tear up your pussy."
"I want to fuck you until you can't walk anymore."

Any sex act that would require a visit to the ER is not worth it and an immediate turn off for me. If what you have in mind for me has me seriously injured afterwards, I'll just masturbate. It's far easier, safer and I always cum with a smile. :D
Totally, I only accept the usual accidental ER visits where my body does it to itself. Makes a great acid test for new guys and embarrassed doctors when I explain what happened, a double win.
 
“I heard you’re a slut”

Quite possibly - but you won’t be finding out.

Yeah, good example Em, I cringe all over with that one.... I would never like anyone to say that IRL and only in writing if the guy meet a bad end at the end of the day.
 
For vagina: Gash, twat, slit. Pussy isn't great but better than the other three
For vaginal wetness: Cream, Juice. I know, doesn't leave many other options.
For cum: Seed, Jizz, Spooge, and Spunk. I'd think any of those would totally turn a woman off. Spunk? Really? Wtf, guys?
For circumcision: Cut. Sounds like an angry word meant to make those who are circumcised feel like they are damaged..
For breasts: Titties. Ugh. Honestly, "Breast(s)" is such a beautiful word; can't we just settle on that?

Yeah, I'm pretty fussy... Probably why if I watch porn at all it's with the audio muted. ..Hearing all the dumb words and phony moans kills it for me.
 
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For vagina: Gash, twat, slit. Pussy isn't great but better than the other three
For vaginal wetness: Cream, Juice (I know, doesn't leave many other options).
For cum: Jizz, Spooge, and Spunk. I'd think any of those would totally turn a woman off.
For circumcision: Cut. Sounds like an angry word conjured by those who are self-conscious about being uncircumcised.
For breasts: Titties. Ugh. Honestly, "Breast(s)" is such a beautiful word; can't we just settle on that?

Yeah, I'm pretty fussy... Probably why if I watch porn at all it's with the audio muted. ..Hearing all the dumb words and phony moans kills it for me.
Cut IS violent. Circumcision is violent. It is kinda angry.
 
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