PennyThompson
Orgasm Fairy
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Oh my God, now I'm imagining all the upsetting stains on that upholstery.Can I be in the Google doc too? I won't leave any comments, I just want to watch...
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Never ever sit in the hotel cuck chairOh my God, now I'm imagining all the upsetting stains on that upholstery.![]()
my vagina just dry-heaved.Never ever sit in the hotel cuck chair![]()
@SinclairGroupLLP encouraged me to stick with it when I was intimidated by the length it was turning into, and was drip-feeding him a couple thousand words at a time.
OMG I will never look at those chairs the same way again. Thanks for ruining the glamour of it all, Penny. 1 star plus a Viking raid on your home town.Never ever sit in the hotel cuck chair![]()
Now you have to include a hotel cuck chair in your glamorous 5-star hotel heist storyOMG I will never look at those chairs the same way again. Thanks for ruining the glamour of it all, Penny. 1 star plus a Viking raid on your home town.
I don’t think that the cleaners are paid enough to ever make that happen….Now you have to include a hotel cuck chair in your glamorous 5-star hotel heist story![]()
Having good beta readers has made my stuff sooo much better (Thank you again @THBGato @SugarStorm and @DawnDuckie) Getting the ideas, thoughts and comments directly in a Google Doc is the best way to do it I think. I absolutely love reading the comments in the doc, and getting the ideas and suggestions tied directly to the text like that is a great way to understand what the beta reader is talking about.@Actingup and @Nynah tag-teamed me in a google doc, helping me think about pacing and tone and plotting. Watching both of them pick apart my story via google doc comments is the closest I get to BDSM, but I kind of loved it...
Some people struggle to find a single beta readers. Others casually brag about having five.
There's probably an allegory about dating market in there.
I mean, slow-ish...And now I'm excited that @PennyThompson is writing a slow burn lesbian story!
*Anticipation intensifies*I mean, slow-ish...![]()
Their pulses were racing five nanoseconds after they met, but at least you gave them enough time to change the sheets.I mean, slow-ish...![]()
Well... as long as they managed to steer clear of the cuck chair...Their pulses were racing five nanoseconds after they met, but at least you gave them enough time to change the sheets.
More observing that the majority of guys who complain bitterly about never having a date tend to not be very pleasant or lovable, nor actually interested in something beyond the transactional. But I really don't want this to turn into a red pill discussion about dating strategy![]()
Did you mention how long your story was?I don't pretend this is everybody's experience, but when I went onto Match.com asking about women who wanted to be beta readers for my smut stories, it didn't go so well. And I asked nicely!
Rookie mistake, never ask for a beta read until the second date.I don't pretend this is everybody's experience, but when I went onto Match.com asking about women who wanted to be beta readers for my smut stories, it didn't go so well. And I asked nicely!
Different betas bring different strengths.The magic number of beta readers, imho, is two, in that, if one person tells you about an issue which you don't immediately see yourself, it may just be their personal view or quirk, if two of them tell you the same thing independently, then it's likely you have a problem.
After that, you get diminishing returns. If four people have already told you that the story is 'fine' how likely are you to listen to being told it had major structural issues by the fifth?
Now you have to include a hotel cuck chair in your glamorous 5-star hotel heist story![]()
Beta reading is often a reciprocal relationship between authors; the two lovely people I've read for here made it very clear that they would be more than happy to return the favor (that involves me actually writing something for them to read rather than faffing about on the Internet or posting here but that's neither here nor there).My biggest fear with asking for beta readers, and the thing that has kept me from doing so, is what if they want me to beta read in return? I don't know what I'm doing how can I beta read for someone when all I'd probably be able to say is, "Looks great, keep going."
I don’t think that the cleaners are paid enough to ever make that happen….
do not lick the cuck chairWouldn't that depend upon their kink?![]()
do not lick the cuck chair![]()
Beta reading doesn't imply that you need to know what you are doing. Just being a reader is usually enough.My biggest fear with asking for beta readers, and the thing that has kept me from doing so, is what if they want me to beta read in return? I don't know what I'm doing how can I beta read for someone when all I'd probably be able to say is, "Looks great, keep going."
Bouncing ideas off of someone else or being a sounding board, yeah sure I could do that all day. (If the day was sufficiently free.)