Yes, that was my general impression but I didn't have details in my notes. Excellent. Which would make Diane early 30s.
We could always workshop it on this thread...
Actually, Joy has the fewest followers which makes it even stranger. But even Mrs M, who has the most of anyone, only has a bit over 1000 so I don't think it is a major factor.
I always say don't take scores personally, but I think that goes quadruple for these Chain Stories. A lot of the entries only have a coupe of thousand views if that, meaning that they're barely counteracting the effect of most of your 5 team makes giving you a gratis 5. And as always a single one bomber has undue power.
Yes, good idea. Add the words 'finale' or some such into the description.
'Writer' might not be necessary?
Can drop the second and third "get" and rely on parallelism to get the meaning across. Possibly do without the first "get" as well.
Did it the night it was published. Maybe the site is being inconsistent again between the public and private views?
I honestly think this is it. Stag/vixen is a relatively obscure form of infidelity kink (compared to hotwife/cuckold) and there are so many kinks that "kink" itself is hardly going to catch anyone's eye. MILFs, on the other hand, have pretty broad appeal.
Thanks.
That's probably fair. One thing I wanted to do was to put all the characters together in one room so that KQ wouldn't be hampered by trying to write a finale and working out who hadn't actually met or who had just bumped into whom coming out of the coffee shop. I didn't want to spend a huge amount of words on it so I was probably burning through Chekovs quite quickly.
The one thing I regret is putting the suggested word limits at 3k-9k. I wanted to keep them fairly small so people would be encouraged to sign up without it feeling like too much work. I think because both you and Mrs Mackenzie stuck to the rules and were still very much in the introductory phase and careful with just setting the characters up, the story was slow developing. Then Joy came and smashed the word limit and moved things forward, and so did Kelliezgirl although a bit more concisely, but we ended up with both sets of characters having got together by the end of 4 of 6 chapters whereas to me it felt more like the story was naturally only half done. So, yeah, the reason it took a while and was so long was that I did want to get into a position where KQ could write something that felt like resolving dilemas instead of still introducing them in the final part.However, the following scenes were executed really well, and your mastery of the English language was a pleasure to partake in. Each character shone, with their personalities highlighted clearly. Most importantly, it felt like a lot transpired in the chapter, and that you set things up nicely for Kumquat to bring it home with a bang. Pun intended. Now I wish I would have put a bit more effort - and length - into my own contribution, as it feels like the most forgettable out of the collection by far. Nevertheless, a true pleasure to watch characters that I've helped create bloom into something greater. I thank you for that!
