Wifetheif
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My Bad Bookclub is tackling "Ugly Love" by Coleen Hoover. How is she so successful? There are dozens and dozen of writers who publish at this site who are more competent wordsmiths and plotters. Ugly Love is written in first person present. Even the parts set six years in the past! The sex scenes are way less erotic than th average story on l.com. We in the bookclub are puzzling over Hoover's success. According to some of her fans, it reads like fan fiction, quick and breezy. I find it infuriating! Hoover does not believe in descriptive prose. She has been quoted as saying that if she encounters more than a few lines of description when she is reading, she moves on and does not read the passage. The Hell? This novel is set in San Francisco -- not that it matters, we don't even get a street name. It could have been set in Pittsburgh, Boston, Manilla, or Shanghai just as easily. There is illogic that burns! The protag's love interest and brother are both pilots yet they DRIVE from San Francisco to San Diego for Thanksgiving, instead of hitching a ride in seats on their airline. The drive from SF to SD is BRUTAL and takes all day. Imagine how much worse it is on the biggest travel day of the year? The flight is about an hour. It's like Coleen Hoover decided to give her studs a "cool" career but then forgot about any realities of that job. One thing I will say. I am much more confident of my own writing ability. If Colleen Hoover can sell more books than the Bible, certainly most of us can crack the best seller lists as well.