John_Vandermeer
Wet Nightmare Writer
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- Dec 6, 2022
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Then sends off the subordinate, back to dry land, to deal with a manufactured urgent work crisis, while insisting his women stay to enjoy the day.
The subordinate, ambitious and blind to inconvenient facts, thinks it is a generous offer. But it does not take long before his wife and daughters find themselves stranded and incomunicated at sea with a pushy host. Who silently backed by his strong and loyal crew and security, plies them with skimpy bikinis, heady drinks, and much more attention from him than they would ever want…
Obviously a menacingly dark NC/R story. I imagine the businessman as a sleek go getter 30yo, the subordinate a bookkeeping worm 50yo, his wife and daughters hot 40yo, 20yos respectively. At the climatic moment mother, who is POV, preemptively offering herself to businessman to spare daughters from the implied threat from the businessman. Then daughters preemptively offering themselves to businessman to spare mother from implied threat of being passed on to crew and security. Ultimately the businessman having his complete way with all three without having had to lift a finger or utter a word in actual coercion. Eventually returning the women with polite compliments to his seemingly clueless subordinate, who delights at his supervisor’s hint of a succesful promotion.
The subordinate, ambitious and blind to inconvenient facts, thinks it is a generous offer. But it does not take long before his wife and daughters find themselves stranded and incomunicated at sea with a pushy host. Who silently backed by his strong and loyal crew and security, plies them with skimpy bikinis, heady drinks, and much more attention from him than they would ever want…
Obviously a menacingly dark NC/R story. I imagine the businessman as a sleek go getter 30yo, the subordinate a bookkeeping worm 50yo, his wife and daughters hot 40yo, 20yos respectively. At the climatic moment mother, who is POV, preemptively offering herself to businessman to spare daughters from the implied threat from the businessman. Then daughters preemptively offering themselves to businessman to spare mother from implied threat of being passed on to crew and security. Ultimately the businessman having his complete way with all three without having had to lift a finger or utter a word in actual coercion. Eventually returning the women with polite compliments to his seemingly clueless subordinate, who delights at his supervisor’s hint of a succesful promotion.
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