SFCTaleSpinner
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My problem: my fanfic just got rejected because Literotica doesn't do non-con involving copyrighted characters. Need to fix.
So it'll help to know exactly what I can get away with in terms of unwanted advances.
See, my non-con scene is pivotal to the plot and characterization of my story. I've got a male character who has a perennial hard-on for my female character. But she's in a relationship and more to the point, she'll never be interested in the guy because he's a sleazebag.
As is, the male character invites himself into a sexual encounter between the woman and her boyfriend. He sticks his dick in her crack (without going full anal) and dry humps it a little. She gives him a weak little "no," as she's horny and in two minds about whether she wants to go full threesome or not. Then she makes up her mind and decides that she isn't in to it. She gives the guy a firm "No!" while pushing him off and that puts a stop to it - the guy doesn't push it any further.
The actual mechanics aren't really important. But what is important is that whatever happens needs to be really offensive to the woman and make her utterly furious with the guy. It also needs to be keeping with the theme that the guy really wants to screw her.
He's an obnoxious jerk who has long been giving the woman crap and she's kind of learned to take his tamer crap (i.e. crass innuendo, leering at her, fleeting bodily contact) in her stride. So for the 'incident' to have the impact it needs, the guy needs to take it to the next level.
As I said, it's a really pivotal scene. It occurs at the beginning and basically dictates the entire course of the story to follow.
Can someone in the know let me know what kind of leeway I have here to pass the Literotica standards? If anyone has any ideas about how to rework it, I'd be grateful!
So it'll help to know exactly what I can get away with in terms of unwanted advances.
See, my non-con scene is pivotal to the plot and characterization of my story. I've got a male character who has a perennial hard-on for my female character. But she's in a relationship and more to the point, she'll never be interested in the guy because he's a sleazebag.
As is, the male character invites himself into a sexual encounter between the woman and her boyfriend. He sticks his dick in her crack (without going full anal) and dry humps it a little. She gives him a weak little "no," as she's horny and in two minds about whether she wants to go full threesome or not. Then she makes up her mind and decides that she isn't in to it. She gives the guy a firm "No!" while pushing him off and that puts a stop to it - the guy doesn't push it any further.
The actual mechanics aren't really important. But what is important is that whatever happens needs to be really offensive to the woman and make her utterly furious with the guy. It also needs to be keeping with the theme that the guy really wants to screw her.
He's an obnoxious jerk who has long been giving the woman crap and she's kind of learned to take his tamer crap (i.e. crass innuendo, leering at her, fleeting bodily contact) in her stride. So for the 'incident' to have the impact it needs, the guy needs to take it to the next level.
As I said, it's a really pivotal scene. It occurs at the beginning and basically dictates the entire course of the story to follow.
Can someone in the know let me know what kind of leeway I have here to pass the Literotica standards? If anyone has any ideas about how to rework it, I'd be grateful!