I am primarily a Adult Visual Novel (i.e. porn games) writer who is interested in posting a couple of stories to Literotica.
My primary focus is adjusting chapter breaks, tagging chapters, finding appealing titles, and any other common practices to prepare a story for the Literotica audience.
I am looking for an editor who can help me fit these stories to a style common to Literotica. I have never posted anything to the site before and have not thought through how to apply tags to chapters, etc.
I am also open to suggestions, corrections, general feedback, etc.
Both stories involve NonConsent/Reluctance (emphasis on Reluctance), Incest/Taboo, and some watersports.
Both stories feature single mothers who are high school teachers, their sons, and one of her students who also knows her son.
"Katherine Candy Carter" (41k words, 14 chapters, basically finished)
The first story is narrated by Mrs.Carter. Prior to the events of this story she was blackmailed into serving 4 unknown (who they were is later revealed and are 18 yrs old) students at a gloryhole. At the beginning of the story she is confronted by the school bully, Mitch, who has a camera in the gloryhole and recorded her performance. Mitch enjoys bullying her son and blackmailing Mrs.Carter. There is some crossdressing/sissification (of her son), consensual and reluctant incest (mother & son), and watersports (M/f.) Very little of this story actually involves the classroom, and most of it focuses on Mrs.Carter taking on an alternate life as Mitch's new fucktoy, "Miss Candy".
"Mrs.Korinne" (currently 77k words, 39 chapters, about 40% complete)
The second story is narrated by Andre, an 18 yr old high school senior, and involves his best friend Thaddeus (Thade) and Thade's mother, "Mrs.Korinne". Mrs.K is a high school math teacher with frequent drug relapses. Andre & Thade hatch a plan to dominate Mrs.K and control her life as a way of keeping her off drugs. Incest/Taboo is teased throughout, but doesn't manifest until about 60k words into the story. Light BDSM, some Group Sex, some Anal, as well as the tags mentioned above. Story alternates between events happening in school/classroom and events happening at home, shopping trips, nightclubs, etc. This is definitely the more interesting story of the two. Currently I'm trying to figure out ways to more directly involve humiliation and embarrassment for Mrs.K in the classroom. The cast of main characters also include Jasmin (Andre's girlfriend and partner), Katie (Thade's girlfriend and submissive), and Sophia (Thade's cousin who is determined to marry him, even if that means she has to be submissive to him.)
If either/both of these stories sound like something you would be interested in editing &/or providing feedback on please let me know. Also let me know what your preferred format is (e-mailing a word document, providing you an editable link to a google doc, etc.)
Thanks,
Theo Malt
Reminder:
* No e-mail addresses allowed in posts ~ personal info prohibited per forum guidelines.
My primary focus is adjusting chapter breaks, tagging chapters, finding appealing titles, and any other common practices to prepare a story for the Literotica audience.
I am looking for an editor who can help me fit these stories to a style common to Literotica. I have never posted anything to the site before and have not thought through how to apply tags to chapters, etc.
I am also open to suggestions, corrections, general feedback, etc.
Both stories involve NonConsent/Reluctance (emphasis on Reluctance), Incest/Taboo, and some watersports.
Both stories feature single mothers who are high school teachers, their sons, and one of her students who also knows her son.
"Katherine Candy Carter" (41k words, 14 chapters, basically finished)
The first story is narrated by Mrs.Carter. Prior to the events of this story she was blackmailed into serving 4 unknown (who they were is later revealed and are 18 yrs old) students at a gloryhole. At the beginning of the story she is confronted by the school bully, Mitch, who has a camera in the gloryhole and recorded her performance. Mitch enjoys bullying her son and blackmailing Mrs.Carter. There is some crossdressing/sissification (of her son), consensual and reluctant incest (mother & son), and watersports (M/f.) Very little of this story actually involves the classroom, and most of it focuses on Mrs.Carter taking on an alternate life as Mitch's new fucktoy, "Miss Candy".
"Mrs.Korinne" (currently 77k words, 39 chapters, about 40% complete)
The second story is narrated by Andre, an 18 yr old high school senior, and involves his best friend Thaddeus (Thade) and Thade's mother, "Mrs.Korinne". Mrs.K is a high school math teacher with frequent drug relapses. Andre & Thade hatch a plan to dominate Mrs.K and control her life as a way of keeping her off drugs. Incest/Taboo is teased throughout, but doesn't manifest until about 60k words into the story. Light BDSM, some Group Sex, some Anal, as well as the tags mentioned above. Story alternates between events happening in school/classroom and events happening at home, shopping trips, nightclubs, etc. This is definitely the more interesting story of the two. Currently I'm trying to figure out ways to more directly involve humiliation and embarrassment for Mrs.K in the classroom. The cast of main characters also include Jasmin (Andre's girlfriend and partner), Katie (Thade's girlfriend and submissive), and Sophia (Thade's cousin who is determined to marry him, even if that means she has to be submissive to him.)
If either/both of these stories sound like something you would be interested in editing &/or providing feedback on please let me know. Also let me know what your preferred format is (e-mailing a word document, providing you an editable link to a google doc, etc.)
Thanks,
Theo Malt
Reminder:
* No e-mail addresses allowed in posts ~ personal info prohibited per forum guidelines.
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