Shendude
Literotica Guru
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Well, I see some other people have posted threads looking for feedback and such, so I'm gonna give it a shot:
The Revolution Cums, is a sci-fi tale of a sexy dystopia. The introduction is a pure exposition (which is the case for the first post of most of my stories actually), with only a single addition thus far (by moi), introducing some actual story.
Anyone have comments, suggestions, or other helpful feedback?
The Revolution Cums, is a sci-fi tale of a sexy dystopia. The introduction is a pure exposition (which is the case for the first post of most of my stories actually), with only a single addition thus far (by moi), introducing some actual story.
Anyone have comments, suggestions, or other helpful feedback?