ElectricBlue
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If you've established through context that it's a daydream, I see no reason why that wouldn't work. A phrase or two should be enough - I can't see why you'd need further signposts. And easy to segue out of - he stirred, shook his head to clear it, hearing the day to day sounds of the outside world drift in.EDIT: the way the daydream is narrated is as something like it's happening, with direct dialogue, actions and all. It's not a narration describing the general idea of what's happening in her head.